2207:. Although in quotation marks, "dark world" isn't mentioned in the source. According to the source the player has to get a "grade A", not A+, to access the alt levels. According to the source all of the alt (warp) levels are retro style. To access the alt levels the source say "with a Grade A they'll unlock the alternate expert version of that level" which is slightly too close to our version of " an "A+" grade, which unlocks a harder alternate version"
1081:"The PC release went smoother from a promotional standpoint, but highlighted many hardware-related bugs that had been missed in testing that were quickly fixed." -- I don't really understand what this sentence means. How did it go smoother? Also, the "highlighted many hardware-related bugs that had been missed in testing that were quickly fixed" confuses me, on top of being a strange run-on. I don't understand it well enough to offer a suggestion, though.
1060:"The pair designed the game to be deliberately "retro", imitating the aesthetics of traditional platform games, but with a modern sensibility regarding difficulty: rather than a frustrating type of difficulty, they wanted the game to be rewarding and challenging; to this end they included infinite lives, quick restarts of levels, obvious goals, and short levels." -- This is quite a snake. Try chopping it up into two, maybe three sentences.
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reliable, as the confirmed developers of the game are the most reliable source on its creation. While some of what Team Meat has stated has then been duplicated by third-party sources, this doesn't change the reliability of the original info to begin with. And sometimes, these development aspects are just not covered by third-parties (not necessarily the case here, but moreso for any indie games to begin with). --
412:"The next day they announced that while all versions would be released in the same month, the game would be released for XBLA first due to "contractual obligations". The developers were contacted by Microsoft in August 2010 with the prospect of a promotion for the game at Microsoft's 2010 Fall GameFeast XBLA promotion." So they had contractual obligations before signing the contract with Microsoft?
2009:"Players must guide Meat Boy to the end of each level while avoiding buzzsaws, salt, and various other fatal obstacles. The player can jump and run and can jump off or slide down walls. The core gameplay, requiring fine control and split-second timing, has been compared to traditional platform games such as Mega Man and N."→Doesn't mention salt, doesn't mention "N" by name as far as I can see.
967:"Players control a small, skinless, cube-shaped character named Meat Boy as he attempts to rescue his girlfriend, Bandage Girl, from the villainous Dr. Fetus through over 300 hazardous levels." -- "Players control Meat Boy, a skinless, cube-shaped character, as he attempts to rescue his girlfriend, Bandage Girl, from the villainous Dr. Fetus. The game contains over 300 levels and ."
356:"Clearing certain warp zones or collecting enough bandages, which are hidden within the game's levels, unlocks guest characters from other indie games. A replay function that can be accessed after a level has been completed shows all the player's attempts at completing the level simultaneously." The sentences do not appear to be linked to one another.
1157:"Gilbert specifically cited the level of difficulty as the reason for not giving the game a perfect score, as while it was the core of the game, it made it inaccessible to some players." -- "Gilbert cited the level of difficulty, which he believed made the game inaccessible to some players, as his reason for not awarding the game a perfect score."
1072:"The next day they announced that while all versions would be released in the same month, the game would be released for XBLA first due to "contractual obligations"." -- "The next day, they announced that, while all versions would be released in the same month, the game would be released for XBLA first because of "contractual obligations"."
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cases- heck, in all cases- the information has to come from the devs; no one else could possible know anything about the game's development other than the people who were there. Primary sources can't be used for notability/importance, and you're probably right that I'm relying on them too much (25% is high), but I don't see how they could
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sure the availability of the physical soundtrack was noted across other vg sites), but when they are talking about specific design elements and decisions for the game, there is absolutely nothing wrong with their own blog as the source, since if there are news stories, they are going to be likely pointing right back to that blog. --
345:"Hidden warp zones are accessed by finding portals in specific levels. These feature retro-styled bonus levels, which have a limit of three lives or are patterned after another video game." The terms "warp zone" and "retro-styled bonus levels" are not all that accessible. Also, is that meant to be "or"? As in, are all of them
957:"Super Meat Boy is a platformer indie game developed by Team Meat, designed by Edmund McMillen and Tommy Refenes." -- This is fairly minor, but, since it's the first sentence, I've got to bring it up. "... Team Meat, designed by ..." is clunky. Try "designed by Edmund McMillen and Tommy Refenes and developed by Team Meat".
201:, has all of its refs working and archived and using the new |deadurl=no, has alt text, and no redirects. It's ready to be mercilessly torn apart for obvious flaws that I should have seen myself! Oh, and I guess I'm still in the Wikicup? I'll be submitting this for points if this passes while I'm still "competing". --
2076:. The article looks more than enough to be a featured article. I've added some of the reviewers complaints of the game in the reception section with sources. I've also fixed the sources that support "indie games" being written; changed "salt" to "crumbling blocks" and changed "N" to "Ghosts 'n Goblin"-
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Completing a level within a certain time earns an "A+" grade, which unlocks a harder alternate version of the level in the "dark world", an optional set of difficult levels. Hidden stages called warp zones are accessed by finding portals in specific levels. These warp zones feature bonus levels that
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are a questionable source??? They're the "experts" at the knowledge of the internals of the game, there is no way that should be considered unreliable. There are some of the announcements that they have in this that could be replaced with sourced coverage from other media (for example, I'm pretty
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Ugh, sorry about that. Your above concerns have all been addressed. All of the points were there in the refs- "chapters" was covered by ref 5, "indie game characters" by ref 2, "N" by the MTV review, etc., but the right refs weren't covering the right sentences. I'll go through the gameplay section
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Busy at work, I'll get to your issues soon, but just wanted to interject- so, in your opinion, if the developer says "I did blah while making this game(/book)" it would be unreliable, but if a journalist asked them in an interview and they said "I did blah", that would be reliable? Because in both
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I do agree that over-reliance on the primary sources can be a problem normally; I know several can be replaced as they are just news items (soundtrack release, etc.), but I don't think all of them can be, and may leave, say, 8-10 of them still in place. The point I question is the issue of being
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In that case, my question is whether we're making an exception for video games? Normally I write about books, but many of the modern books I like to write about only receive coverage on blogs and such, and I'd consider an author blog to be unreliable. I don't really see the difference between an
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The point of the game is that it is hard. So that should be given some mention in the
Gameplay section. The particular phrase was also addressed above already, and is a rather precise description of the game's levels. So perhaps we can keep the adjective, but add some of existing references from
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I think the original description came from McMillen specifically countering PETA that the character was "made of meat", saying that he was instead "skinless"; I don't think it's that important, though, so if it's confusing I'll just change it to "red". I don't think readers are that bothered by
1144:"Sales have been strong, with the Xbox 360 version moving nearly 140,000 units by the end of 2010." -- "have been" is a quickly-dated term on Knowledge. I recommend changing the phrasing to be more timeless. Also, "moving" isn't the best word to use for a digitally distributed game.
703:"which is freely updated with new officially curated levels" -- I am not sure "freely" can be used as an adverb this way. "Freely" implies "easily". So perhaps "which is updated with new free officially curated levels"? Although I realize it bunches up adjectives a lot. —
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Either reference everything in the lead (some peoples' preference) or nothing (mine). Either works. Minor bits of referencing looks like either you've included unreferenced material, or you have material in the lead that's not mentioned in the body. Both alternatives are
1075:"The developers were contacted by Microsoft in August 2010 with the prospect of a promotion for the game at Microsoft's 2010 Fall GameFeast XBLA promotion if the game was finished by then." -- Run-on with an unnecessary double "promotion". Needs restructuring.
739:"McMillen and Jonathan McEntee's flash game" and "The original Meat Boy is a Flash game" -- it should probably spell out Adobe Flash game (at least on first occurrence) and not easter egg link to "browser game", which is a superset of flash game. —
994:"Along with Meat Boy, there are several unlockable characters appearing from various video games, generally from other indie games." -- "The player may control characters other than Meat Boy, many of whom first appeared in other indie video games."
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I can't find anything in the source about the timing, and I think the bit about being compared is off - the developer said he wanted it to be a recreation of those games (in other words they inspired this game), which is different, in my
970:"The game received acclaim from critics. In 2010 it received an award" -- unnecessary double "received". Could be fixed by changing the first sentence to "was acclaimed by critics". A comma would be preferable in between "2010" and "it".
667:"through over 300 levels filled with deadly hazards." to "through over 300 hazardous levels." (or deadly or synonym) -- "deadly" and "hazards" are tautologies, plus "filled with" passive voice can be substituted with an adjective. —
841:"The Xbox 360 version of the game currently has an aggregate score of 90/100 at Metacritic and 90.41% at GameRankings. The Windows version has similar scores, with a 91.25% at GameRankings and 88/100 at Metacritic." -- ref order —
991:"The level editor features a level portal where users can upload created levels." -- We were already told that PC users could access user-created levels a few sentences back. I recommend merging this sentence into the first one.
441:"Due to Microsoft's low expectations for the game, Super Meat Boy was only lightly promoted, despite greatly outselling all of the other games in the GameFeast event." This implies the promotion came after the heavy selling.
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for now—I've gone through and made some minor tweaks, so the prose looks good to my eye. However I did a random spot check on some of the sources, current refs 1,2,5,10, and 15, and I found some discrepancies, for example:
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All of the information that is available is there, in the
Reception. Those two sentences, saying how much it has sold by date x. Pretty much no video game FA has more, as such data is generally not made publicly available.
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I'm still none the wiser. Is Pacman a character with or without skin? What difference does the skin/lack of make, ie how is it perceived, why is it important etc? I'm not being pedantic here, I genuinely don't understand.
575:"Completing a level within a certain time will earn an "A+" grade, which unlocks a harder alternate level in the "dark world"." What's the dark world? How is the level related to the one that has been completed, if at all?
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Day-month-year dates in lead sections are difficult reading. Cutting it down to month-year or even just the year is enough for the general reader. If they want more, the infobox or the rest of the article will provide
362:"These characters can be unlocked by collecting enough bandages or completing certain warp zones." You've already mentioned this; perhaps mention of the bonus characters should be kept out of the main gameplay section?
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The game was initially set to include around 100 levels, and to have both co-operative and competitive multiplayer modes. However, the multiplayer option was dropped in favor of increasing the number of
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indie game through Steam and XBLA, so "worldwide" has little meaning in this context. Both distributors don't offer public sale breakdown by region and there is not enough material for such a section. —
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What about some of the complaints of the game? Sure, it was mostly positive, but there were still less-positive comments—IGN, for example, noted that the cut scenes showed the lack of production value
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In Meat Boy you must guide the protagonist through an increasingly difficult series of (often) vertical scrolling levels filled with crumbling blocks, spinning saw blades, and other deadly obstacles.
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which appears to be written by the game developers, which is an over-reliance on a questionable primary source. Try to find the information from these pages in more reliable secondary sources.
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2311:. I think used sparingly I might say okay, but am on the fence in that regard, but for a page to rely so heavily on a questionable source is problematic, and needs to be resolved to some extent.
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Addressed all of part 3. I'd like to apologize; this article isn't up to my usual standards and I'm feeling a bit embarrassed about all of the obvious prose flaws you and others keep finding. --
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1066:"extra levels in form of the dark worlds" -- There's a missing word in there, but I'm not sure merely adding it would fix this. But, for some reason, I can't think of a solution right now.
1613:"unique retro art style" The last word is redundant. The first is peacock unless a quote and in any case is a word to avoid in good writing (anything that's not a direct copy is "unique")
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Not to speak for
Truthkeeper, but I'd say the issue is not that this source is likely to contain errors, but that it's a primary source - we tend to prefer secondary sources for FAs.
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line by line this afternoon to make sure that I didn't transpose facts between refs anywhere else. Some negative reception has been added by SCB below; I'll find some more as well. --
1220:- based just up the number of issues I found with the lead, which is all but one of the points below. The additional one is a very serious criticism - response would be interesting.
979:"The player can jump and run and can jump off or slide down walls." -- I can't think of a clean way to rephrase this without a complete rewrite, but it's difficult reading as-is.
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because the developers themselves produced it. Also, because I can't find a publisher for the site, I'm concerned it might be a publicity site. And finally, it could fall under
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Tried to clarify- it was contracted to come out for XBLA when it was done; the promotional thing was an additional thing proposed later, not part of the original contract. --
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Issues fixed, and I ran through it checking for italics errors. Cite and statement it was referencing removed, could have sworn I did that earlier. Thanks for the review! --
1000:"Some bandages can only be collected by using certain characters. Some levels ..." -- "Some bandages can only be collected by using certain characters, and some levels ..."
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I have addressed all of these issues. As a courtesy to the delegates, I've only replied inline when I had a more substantive comment than "Fixed". Thanks for the review! --
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I don't believe so; they've only made this one game, and both of the designers have their own articles- an article on the group would just be a three-way copypaste job. --
2003:"Along with Meat Boy, there are several unlockable characters appearing from various video games, generally from other indie games"→"indie characters" not supported by
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The lead doesn't contain enough on the Music section. In fact, I'd say that it doesn't contain enough material related to the
Gameplay or Development sections, either.
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That's all I've got for tonight. Sorry I couldn't do the whole article, but I'm getting too tired to focus. I'll try to pull together the rest of my review tomorrow.
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That's all I noticed. Content looks solid, sources seem fine, FURs are good, etc. A few prose tweaks and a beefier lead are all that's needed for me to support.
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I'd like to add that primary sources are critical to almost every video game FA. Only the biggest games receive secondary coverage of their development cycles.
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is a blog. What makes it reliable? Also in this source the OP says the development mode (dev mode) is buggy and rough - doesn't mention tools. The article says,
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as the former is a plausible search term, but at this time does not have an article and is perhaps not notable beyond being the basis for to Super Meat Boy. —
982:"The core gameplay, requiring fine control and split-second timing, has ..." -- "The core gameplay requires fine control and split-second timing, and has ..."
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Players can also access an unsupported developer mode inside the game to edit their own levels using the "rough" tools that Team Meat used to create the game
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complete on the game, so for the final two months they worked daily, slept" -- "complete on the game, so, for the final two months, they worked daily, slept"
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The core gameplay requires fine control and split-second timing, and has been compared to traditional platform games such as Mega Man and Ghosts 'n
Goblins.
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400:"It has currently garnered over 840,000 views at Newgrounds, and 8 million overall, since its release." Sourced to a fairly old article- perhaps "as of"?
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1166:"classic 8-bit games. He lauded the game's soundtrack" -- "class 8-bit games, and lauded the game's soundtrack". Also, go ahead and axe the "he stated".
1460:"300 hazardous levels" sounds like sales speak and certainly breaches peacock at least, if not NPOV. If it's from their sales patter, source and quote.
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The amount of "McMillen"s is a bit jarring. Try changing "McMillen's Flash games" to "his Flash games" and "McMillen was working" to "he was working".
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might have a copy, although unfortunately I can't use the database to find exactly when the review was done so you'll have to make an educated guess.
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In my opinion, you should give the rest of the article a read. I agree that the lead is rough, but it isn't representative of the article's quality.
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If it may not be notable, then the redirect is a good idea, and of course there's then no need to include the link in the article as a redirect. --
468:"game's precise control, excellent level design, and smooth difficulty curve." Without quote marks, this implies that we are endorsing that opinion
1090:"into an expanded and cohesive soundtrack" -- Sounds a bit POV when phrased like this. Clarifying the meaning would probably alleviate the issue.
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Again, apologies, I could have been clearer, that IMO it's more encylopedic language. At least I was clear that it was a personal preference! --
581:"The Xbox Live Arcade version features an unlockable mode called "Teh Internets", which is freely updated with new levels." Official new levels?
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The few spotchecks I did showed some close paraphrasing that needs to be rewritten. I've only looked at a few sources and noted what I found.
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Thanks
Nikkimaria, basically that's what I'm driving at. I see a couple of problems that need to be resolved before I can strike the oppose.
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I'd expect a proper section detailing sales worldwide to meet our criteria of comprehensiveness - is there a reason this isn't included?
406:"McMillen and Refenes live on opposite sides of America" Probably should be shifted to past tense. Where they live now is not important.
1147:"Critics praised the game's platform elements, with specific commentary often directed at the game's difficulty." -- "Critics praised
976:"multiple chapters" -- "multiple" is redundant, since the "s" on the end of "chapters" already tells us that more than one is present.
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Which is why (UK) is not italicized; this was only fixed 2 hours before you posted this review, so it may have still been there. --
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Players must guide Meat Boy to the end of each level while avoiding buzzsaws, crumbling blocks, and various other fatal obstacles.
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Very nice article generally, I suspect it will soon make a great FA. Furthermore, sounds like a game I'd really enjoy. Good work!
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review is the lowest score I could find (8/10) I think you could do with adding those reviewers' comments to the mix (
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Thanks for the fixes. I take the point that the rest of the article may be in better shape. I'll review when I can. --
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Gameplay section should start off by saying it is a platform game, as that is the main fact about what the game is. —
819:"the game's soundtrack was released as a download-only album via the online" -- "download-only" can be wikilinked to
533:"Like other characters in the game, Meat Boy has appeared in other games" I had to reread this before I understood
1163:"noted that the game's visual presentation is unique" -- "noted the uniqueness of the game's visual presentation"
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Meat Boy is a flash game, but Super Meat Boy is a...? Or is the mention of flash too detailed for the lead?
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Adjectives won't kill you, you know. But removed, thanks for the insinuation that I'm plagiarizing. --
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Thank you, your reviews are always very helpful! Addressed all of the above points. --
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be used to verify facts about things that only they could know about. --
471:"Official Xbox Magazine (UK)'s" "(UK)" is not part of the title, surely?
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342:"follows Meat Boy" A couple of words explaining who the character is?
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859:"as well as in the XBLA game ilomilo." -- italics for game name. —
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More checks may be warranted, especially in the gameplay section.
1069:"February 22, 2010, revealed" -- Second comma should be removed.
927:. PresN is clearly keeping this article up to a high standard.--
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I made a few tweaks to shorten the review. Here's part three:
779:"evoking the aesthetics" -- you cannot "evoke" aesthetics. —
1063:"This was pushed back" -- "The release date was pushed back"
950:: Here's the start of my review. It's going to be nit-picky.
2119:. My concerns have been addressed. The article looks good.
997:"enough bandage items placed ..." -- "enough" is redundant.
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doesn't seem to link to an article on a character as such
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Reception where reviewers call the levels/game hard? —
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1172:"December 1, 2010, to promote" -- Second comma goes.
633:. I feel this article is ready for featured status.
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295:checks out; nice work on the thorough rationales.
2445:The above discussion is preserved as an archive.
43:. No further edits should be made to this page.
2177:Will check a few more as soon as I have time.
2451:No further edits should be made to this page.
29:The following is an archived discussion of a
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1366:McMillen's odd character design quirks. --
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41:Knowledge talk:Featured article candidates
1261:Why do you assume that? But sure, linked.
397:Are the non-linked games worth redlinks?
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465:"other reviewers comments" Apostrophe!
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254:FN 45: UK shouldn't be italicized
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459:"and added," Unwarranted comma?
403:"the game; the game" Repetition
1932:Just a note that I redirected
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313:"Team Meat" - worth a redlink?
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2018:, PC Gamers noted minor bugs
1668:600,000 copies... worldwide?
1530:That seems a good option. --
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450:"on Bandcamp" What is this?
31:featured article nomination
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1848:OK, happy to do so. --
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