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332:"In seventh grade, Bueckers played for the tenth grade and junior varsity basketball teams at Hopkins High School" - I am not 100% clued up on how grades work in US schools, but the article on the school suggests that it only starts from the tenth grade. Does this mean she played for a school which she did not attend? Is this normal? Did any sort of special dispensation have to be given? 133:
and I believe it meets the criteria of a featured article. It is comprehensive and well-sourced, illustrated with many good images, and its content does not change significantly on a daily basis. Although it is early in the subject's career, I have been a regular contributor to this article for
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She has a slim build, which encourages opposing teams to force her to play through contact, but displays quickness and agility. <<<=== Maybe restructure or move the last part of this sentence to a new sentence. Also, I think "quickness and agility" is what you might expect from a slim
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14 awards in the infobox still seems like far too many. (The infobox is supposed to provide basic information at a quick glance; excessive length undermines its purpose). A better approach might be "see the body" and link the body section where the awards are listed.
1175:"In January 2018, as a sophomore, Bueckers was sidelined with an ankle injury that had been hurting her up to that point in the season" - recommend indicating the start of the HS ball season for comparison (IIRC it's November in MO, not sure about MN) 1250:"Bueckers has been regarded as the best player in Minnesota girls' high school basketball history" - again RS/AC; do either of the sources specifically say that this is consensus? The first one doesn't seem to, and the second one seems to be dead. 1097:"Bueckers became friends with future National Basketball Association (NBA) player Jalen Suggs while in elementary school" - a bit nitpicky, but the source doesn't support that Suggs in an NBA player, because it was published before he was drafted 935: 1147:"She led Hopkins to a 31–1 record, suffering her only loss to Elk River High School " - recommend rephrasing this to stress more that it was the team's only loss, as basketball is not an individual sport 1200:"On March 16, she scored 13 points to win the Class 4A state championship, 74–45, over Stillwater Area High School" - again "as the team won" or some other phrasing; basketball is a team sport 720: 729:
In , "She matched the program record for points in a season opener set by Kerry Bascom in 1989", I see the source says the most points since Bascom, but not that it was a program record.
419:"Bueckers moved to the Minnesota Metro Stars AAU program" - I had to stop for a minute here and think what AAU could be, so maybe put it in brackets where you used its full name before 184:
I restored some of the more notable awards in the infobox (mostly national honors), and added sources to the awards section you created. Let me know if you have further input on this.
394:"She was additionally one of three finalists for the Gatorade National Player of the Year award" - no need to link the award again as you only just linked it in the last paragraph 732:
The following sources support the associated statements: (first sophomore to win award), (career stats), (finalists), (Maya Moore), (tournament stats), (signature shot)
1225:"leading Hopkins to another undefeated season and 62 consecutive wins" - it's not specified that the prior season was undefeated, so the use of "another" stands out as odd 130: 523:
If she's at university, is it worth mentioning what subject her degree course is in (assuming this is public knowledge)? Or does it not work like that in the US?
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Sources are an appropriate mix of sports news websites/newspapers, local news websites/newspapers, and official team websites. I don't see anything questionable.
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to win a national college player of the year award. Bueckers has several gold medals representing the United States in youth tournaments.
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Please be advised that I have watched precisely one basketball game in my life, so am approaching this from a decidedly
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That's all I got on a first pass. An engaging read even with essentially no knowledge of the subject matter :-) --
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I have not been able to find this information, although it is sometimes publicly available for college athletes.
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ESPN is a publisher. It is correct in most sources, but there are a few where it is referred to as a website.
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It is common for basketball biographies to have a long list of awards (see FA-class articles like
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I think "Footnotes" is usually just written as "Notes", not sure if there is a reason for that.
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Noting that I reviewed this article for GA, and again at peer review, hence the quick support.
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has been promoted, but there may be a delay in bot processing of the close. Please see
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to archive all of the sources if you can. Otherwise, just archive the ones below using
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There are a few instances of BIG EAST being in all caps when it doesn't need to be.
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says that students in 7th grade can be eligible to play for high school teams.
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Typically, an awards and honors section goes after all of the prose (see e.g.
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Changed statement to "one of the best" as it does not appear to be consensus
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I removed this statement after not finding a source saying it is consensus.
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issue in the High school career section. Please remove this issue. Cheers.
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in Minnesota, and had a historic first season at UConn, becoming the first
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Like Chris, my experience of basketball consists of half an NBA game and
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In the first sentence, "Big East Conference (add "in NCAA Division I")"
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As screamed by coaches across the country, "There is no 'I' in team!"
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Subsequent comments should be made on the article's talk page or in
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I addressed all of your points and thank you for the support.
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Since you link most of the sources, you could link CT Post to
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nearly 2 years and expect to make sure it remains up to date.
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I have addressed all of the points. Thanks for the review.
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She was a Youth Olympic gold medalist in 3x3 basketball
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Knowledge (XXG):Featured article candidates
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Knowledge (XXG) talk:Featured article candidates
Gog the Mild
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Paige Bueckers
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Paige Bueckers
women's basketball
college
UConn
high school basketball
Hopkins High School
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