1031:"The original Steeplechase Pier was erected by builder F. J. Kelly at an unknown date, but construction had been completed within 30 days" - I don't think "but" is appropriate here; these two facts don't contradict each other. What about "The original Steeplechase Pier was erected by builder F. J. Kelly at an unknown date and construction was completed within 30 days".
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I think you go beyond the stated source with "Coney Island could be reached easily from
Manhattan, while appearing to be relatively far away, providing residents the illusion of a proper vacation. As a result, Coney Island began attracting vacationers in the 1830s and 1840s, and numerous resorts were
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Ref 3 is used to cite "It is raised 14 feet (4.3 m) above sea level to protect against storm surges, and, according to a speech given in 1923 to the Rotary Club of
Brooklyn, to "give ample clear space under the boardwalk both longitudinally and laterally"."âthe cited ref actually gives a height of 13
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Ugh: Steeplechase Pier is a 1,040-foot (320 m) pier located at the intersection of the boardwalk and West 17th Street, near the site of
Steeplechase Park, of which the pier was originally part. Steeplechase Pier, at the intersection of the boardwalk and West 17th Street and 1,040 feet (320 m) long,
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The boardwalk's maintenance was in active decline by the 1970s. As such, repairs on two sections of boardwalk between
Brighton 1st and Brighton 15th Streets were underway by 1975. Local officials, such as then-assemblyman Chuck Schumer, and residents of the surrounding communities petitioned for the
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The preceding paragraph tells us how much concrete and sand was used, so this sentence seems misplaced ... The boardwalk has a steel and concrete foundation supporting wood planking for the walkway, though much of this is no longer visible due to the beach having been raised after the boardwalk was
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I was thinking about this as well. However, as a global city, NYC is well known to an international audience, probably more so than the state of NY is. Additionally, the state and city share the same name, so if I had written "Brooklyn, New York", it can be construed to mean either the city or the
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This is the only section of the article I really had difficulty with. The sources mention that the boardwalk was used as a backdrop or setting for these works of media, but they don't elaborate much. I considered removing this paragraph altogether and replacing it with a summary. The paragraph was
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Finished my source review. I reviewed
Cultural significance and Accolades and found no issues. I rechecked ref 87 (now ref 86) and verified the info. I looked at the formatting in References and found no issues. All my source review concerns have been addressed so I will pass the source review. I
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Stopping there on looking at the citations, but please give another pass with an eye towards issues like this. Some may need to switch to cite journal ?? At first glance, the sourcing is reliable but some minor cleanup might be needed. On MOS-y things, no image caption issues, no hyphen/dash
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This article is about the wooden boardwalk in Coney Island, Brooklyn, NYC. First proposed in the 1890s, the boardwalk opened in 1923, and has been renovated and expanded several times since then. Its namesake is a borough president who didn't want the boardwalk to be named after him. There are
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The $ 1 million extension was originally supposed to have been paid for through taxes that were levied on Coney Island property owners via tax assessments. Although some property owners objected to the assessments, they were ultimately forced to pay for the project. .... How about --:
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References generally look to be high-quality reliable sources for NY history; formatted and archived where appropriate (man, they didn't give a lot of writers bylines in the old days, did they?) Article heavily relies on a few sources, but I think they're appropriate given the focus.
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I am checking the sources for accuracy and quality. This is my first in-depth source review, so I welcome feedback on my comments if I can improve. Unless mentioned below, I was able to determine that every source exists and links where it should. I also carried out some spot checks.
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Speaking broadly, I note that there's a lot of unattributed quotes throughout the article that I think should either be attributed, or ideally just axed altogether. It's either important to know that Matt Postal characterized the pergolas as having tuscan columns and red roofs in
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I've had a few minutes to look this over briefly. I've gone through the MOS:LQ issues in the prose, the overuse of "located", and the use of adjectival form in the conversion templates. However, I haven't looked over other issues yet, and will do so after my finals are over.
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The final paragraph of the cultural significance section gets a bit repetitive as it's just listing off various TV shows, movies, etc. Maybe you could give more information about some of the more notable appearances - e.g. what role the boardwalk played in a given film?
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Considering the surrounding context, would it not be better to switch "In 1983, it was estimated that three-quarters of the planks were in good shape" to "In 1983, it was estimated that one-quarter of the planks were not in good shape"? The switch in context is odd.
955:"and an "infrastructure accomplishment" comparable to the Catskill Watershed and Central Park." - The quote marks beg the question of who you are quoting... it would probably be too much detail to attribute the quote in the lead, so paraphrasing it might be better
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I would put the year at the end of the sentence. This keeps the location information together and then describes the time period. Plus, it gets rid of the comma. Suggested rewording: "was installed along the boardwalk outside the New York
Aquarium in 1993."
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I clarified that this was the case as of the early 2010s (the news article was published in 2011). Previous rebuilds are mentioned in the history section, but they're too numerous to individually source in this sentence, so I've removed that part.
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Some of the publishers are a bit informal example: "Steeplechase Park
Highlights". Parachute Jump : NYC Parks. June 26, 1939. Archived from the original on July 11, 2019. The publisher is the New York City Department of Parks & Recreation.
2290:, but I will also comment on anything that could be improved. I'll post up some comments below over the next couple days, which you should either respond to, or ask me questions on issues you are unsure of. I'll be claiming points towards the
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I don't understand this source: it appears to be a book (?), but no publisher is listed. If it's a journal, it seems to need an article title. American
Lumberman. American Lumberman. 1922. p. 22. Archived from the original on September 21,
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Estimate is uppercase in the rest of the article? Also, ... The boardwalk's maintenance was in active decline by the 1970s, but repairs on two sections of boardwalk between Brighton 1st and Brighton 15th Streets were underway by
1023:"Steeplechase Pier was originally used by anglers and it was also used by ferry lines to Coney Island until 1932." - this is a bit clunky, maybe "Steeplechase Pier was used by anglers and, until 1932, by ferry lines to Coney Island"?
923:. I made some minor copyedit adjustments (feel free to revert if they are not helpful). I am not certain we need to link drinking fountains, but that is a judgment call (restrooms link could be helpful as that word is a euphemism).
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Ref 54 is used to cite the fact that most of the beach was taken up by private interests and resorts, but it mostly only hints at that; it seems like you'd need to cite the opening pages as well (801 covers it much more directly.)
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I think the newspaper clip is a speech by T. I. Jones to the Rotary Club of
Brooklyn (see page 29 of the source) and I can't find Farley being mentioned in the article. I don't think it's proper to accredit Farley to this quote.
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the way he said it (and hey, the guy does great descriptions, but we can leave some for the report) or it can be rephrased. Right now it's just kind of weird when we're jumping out of Knowledge's voice for these unknown
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Similar here ... this seems to be a bound collection of journals, but the article title and volume are missing ... American Lumberman. American Lumberman. 1922. p. 22. Archived from the original on September 21,
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1066:"and its simultaneous relative distance from the city of Brooklyn to provide the illusion of a proper vacation" - this is an awkward read. I get what you are going for but I'm sure how to rephrase it myself.
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The $ 1 million extension was to be paid for via tax assessments levied on Coney Island property owners. Although some property owners objected to the assessments, they were ultimately forced to pay for the
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Since there is a separate section for the 21st century, it is odd to see it mentioned in the 20th century section ... Further work was undertaken on the boardwalk in the late 20th and early 21st centuries.
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My impression is that there would be a hyphen preceding "long", since that is an adverb modifying the adjective phrase "2-mile". Otherwise, "2-mile long" reads as though "long" is in itself an adjective.
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I've reworded the sentence. It wasn't geographically distant from the city of Brooklyn, but only gave the appearance of such (I think because of the undeveloped land and the lack of road transport).
1109:" By the first decade of the 20th century, it contained three competing major amusement parks " what is "it" referring to? Coney Island, presumably, but it's not mentioned in the preceding sentence
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Though concrete was cheaper and did not require wood sourced from the Amazon rainforest, many local residents and officials felt that the boardwalk would only be authentic if made of wood. --: -->
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The next sentence mentions three competing amusement parts, but Sea Lion Park is not one of them. What happened to this park? A half-sentence or sentence explaining this would be appropriate.
1004:" which is both a city landmark and a National Register of Historic Places listing." - correct me if I'm wrong but isn't the "listing" the designation itself, not the building so designated?
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Here's a redundant "addition" (similar to "also"): In addition, in October 1938, the city acquired 18 acres (7.3 ha) from developer Joseph P. Day for the proposed eastward extension. --: -->
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The final paragraph of the 21st century section leaves the reader hanging. Is the reconstruction still ongoing? Does its designation as a city landmark affect the reconstruction efforts?
1085:"A series of fires in the resorts in the 1880s and 1890s opened up large tracts of land" - this piques my curiosity. Did they all burn to the ground? or were the resorts just shut down?
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The "almost everyone" here is ill-defined ... is that referring to the public, to governmental boards or commissions, what? This time, almost everyone supported the proposed boardwalk,
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As part of the construction of the boardwalk, 16 rock jetties spaced at intervals of 600 feet (180 m) were built to prevent violent waves from crashing against the boardwalk. --: -->
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This included the replacement of the original street lights with replicas in the 1960s, as well as the replacement of benches, drinking fountains, pavilions, and comfort stations.
611:"Measured" is unnecessary ... The extension measured about 3,000 to 4,000 feet (910 to 1,220 m) long, ... the extension was ... don't use a big word when a small word suffices :)
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built."âthe ref provided covers its proximity to Manhattan making it an attractive spot, but doesn't really editorialize (at least on that page) about an "illusion" of vacation.
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Given the statements they ref in the article, I don't think that's any great loss (I see you removed the BKLYNER one), but I defer to anyone else to second my concerns with the
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The source and image reviews have been conducted, and this nomination has four prose supports, with no opposes. Is anything else needed for this nomination? Thanks in advance.
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I am not familiar with New York geography or the boardwalk, so this will be from a "non-expert" perspective. I will begin with the prose. Overall, I only have small quibbles:
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is overused and adds nothing: Coney Island contained three competing major amusement parks ... unless it can be replaced with something more descriptive, it could be ditched.
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I'd think you could use sources about the films/tv shows/etc, as opposed to ones specifically about Coney Island, to provide more detail. But this is not a major issue IMO.
1225:"In 2014, amid the push to rebuild the boardwalk using concrete"..."later in 2014, NYC Parks commenced a project to repair the boardwalk using concrete" - a bit repetitive
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The current beaches are not a natural feature; the sand that would naturally replenish Coney Island is cut off by the jetty at Breezy Point, Queens. Current is redundant.
1184:"Additionally, there was no logicistical difficulty in securing wood:" - typo ("logistical"). Were there logistical issues with concrete? It's not clear from the article
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Yeah, back in the day there were a lot of wooden buildings. The resorts were destroyed by fire, or were damaged beyond repair, so I just clarified that they were razed.
1050:"Several improvements, such as a proposed widening and an auditorium, were never built" I think it might sound slightly better to move "proposed" before "improvements".
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All of my concerns have been addressed, leaning support pending review of sources, etc. Putting this note at the top to avoid collapsing per the template limit problem.
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Steeplechase Pier, the only remaining pier on Coney Island's beach, - could we reword this to avoid the first words and the subsection to not be the same. Best Wishes,
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Though concrete was cheaper and did not require wood sourced from the Amazon rainforest, many local residents and officials felt that wood would be more authentic.
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Done, though I went with a slightly different wording. This early writing was a bit clunky so I did look through the article again for similarly awkward wording.
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its opening, the boardwalk was said to be wider and more expensive than the comparable boardwalks at Atlantic City, the Rockaways, and Long Beach on Long Island.
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Done, but with a slightly different wording. I had added "but" because, despite the pier's date of completion being unknown, the pier was completed so quickly.
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It would be less cumbersome to re-cast this sentence: a 332-foot-long (101 m), 10-foot-tall (3.0 m) wall relief created by Japanese artist Toshio Sasaki --: -->
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Continuing below. I finished the History section. I checked all the links and performed various spot checks (especially for quotes.) Here are some thoughts:
1152:"the formerly seedy waterfront" - "seedy" is a bit informal, should be in quotes if you're quoting Patten, otherwise I think a different word should be used
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The first usage of restrooms refers to those at the level of the boardwalk. The second usage refers to those under the boardwalk, which are no longer open.
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this well-written and well-researched article. I haven't looked at the sources, but I did not see any obvious red flags on a skim of the reference section.
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I've added a sentence about this, and clarified the paragraph. The construction was completed in May 2016; only one section received a full reconstruction.
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I've rephrased this as well. The comfort stations below the boardwalk have been closed, but I can see how the confusion can extend to restrooms in general.
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Ref 47: The source does not state that this was the first bridge. Also, delete the ref after the comma as you already cite this at the end of the sentence.
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was originally part of Steeplechase Park. Look for opportunities to re-cast sentences to avoid the hyphens, and "located at" is almost always redundant.
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story points out while it seems a certainty, the actual vote was delayed a week. Is there a better source from the actual vote that can be used here?
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I have rephrased this. Since Ferris is a proper name, and since our Ferris wheel article capitalizes "Ferris", I think the capitalization is correct.
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recent project to repair the boardwalk and that the Brooklyn borough president's office had budgeted $ 20 million since 1981 to repair the boardwalk.
1144:"in 1904, it was estimated that there would be 1.4 square inches (9.0 cm2) of public beachfront" - any reason why this is "would be" and not "were"?
1058:"Steeplechase Pier was damaged multiple times in the following years due to hurricanes, fires..." - "by" would sound more natural than "due to" here
985:""Comfort stations" or restrooms, also no longer extant," the way this is phrased makes it sound like restrooms are no longer extant - I hope not!
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article on Knowledge ... World War II does not need to be linked here. Everyone knows what it is, no one is going to click it from this article.
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Ref 13 discusses the use of concrete instead of tropical hardwoods for the boardwalk, but doesn't discuss the previous rebuilds of the boardwalk
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As I supported the first time around, I'm sure it'll be fine, just going to give it another read as things have changed since my first review.
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Stopping there for now, will resume at "History" section once you have processed this. Please look for similar in the rest of the article.
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I got to the end of "Description". I will continue this at a later date. Feel free to comment on these concerns in the meantime.
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an eccentric Ferris wheel that is 150 feet (46 m) tall and recognized as a city landmark. (Is Ferris supposed to be uppercase?)
2420:"give ample clear space under the boardwalk both longitudinally and laterally" - this probably needs explaination. Best Wishes,
1168:"who contended that it would bring unwanted social degradation to their community." - as opposed to wanted social degradation?
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However, the addition of the concrete sections was controversial. ... See the top of my user page, this however is not needed.
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and, according to designer Philip Farley, to "give ample clear space under the boardwalk both longitudinally and laterally".
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I've removed the first mention of concrete reconstruction, since it's unnecessary and isn't the main point of the sentence.
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Additionally, there was no logistical difficulty in securing wood: ... additionally is like also, redundant and not needed.
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1176:"wood sourced from trees in the Amazon rainforest," - you could remove "trees"... readers know that wood comes from trees
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Hyphenation issue here: a 150-foot (46 m)-tall eccentric Ferris wheel that is also a recognized city landmark. --: -->
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without pergolas and restrooms - you link restrooms here, but as mentioned you talk about them earlier. Best Wishes,
1160:"Riegelmann and his assistant commissioner of public works opposed naming the boardwalk after him" - any reason why?
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I'll begin a review of this article very soon! My reviews tend to focus on prose and MOS issues, especially on the
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I may be missing it, but I don't see the quote in Ref 4 about the pattern for ease of walking, at least on page 47.
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Thanks, I have fixed all of these. I didn't realize that some of the original syntax was automatically generated.
1206:; is this RS? There's an obvious typo in the second paragraph, which makes me question their editorial practices
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and TV stations. However, there are a few statements that probably can only be referenced to these newer sites.
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several attractions and landmarks on this boardwalk, which became a New York City designated landmark in 2016.
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a wall relief created by Japanese artist Toshio Sasaki that is 332 feet (101 m) long and 10 feet (3.0 m) tall
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I could not find this in the reference. Can you quote the info on the page that is used to verify this?
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Could you please go through the remainder of the article looking for similar before I re-visit?
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Everything above has been addressed; continuing from History (prose is already much improved!):
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I have fixed this. Cite 4, Lumberman, did give a figure of 14 feet. I have added this.
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Not sure on this one - is it 2-mile-long (4.3km) or 2-mile (4.3km) long? Best Wishes,
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The actual quote was "facilitate ease in walking". It's in the third column. My bad.
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This was promoted as a Good Article a year ago thanks to an excellent GA review from
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I did notice that there are a lot of quotes. I've reduced the use of these.
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Do we need the first Brighton? to Brighton 15th Street in Brighton Beach.
110:, another Coney Island-related FAC). After a much-appreciated copy edit by
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originally subdivided - should this not just be "divided"? Best Wishes,
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Yes, definitely. It may take me a day or so since I am busy with finals.
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You mention twice about the bathrooms, I'm not sure why. Best Wishes,
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Steeplechase Pier was originally used by anglers and, until 1932, was
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No prob, pls ping me when I should continue. Good luck with finals!
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It was the wrong volume. I have replaced it with the correct volume.
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used as a bike lane between 6 a.m. and 9 p.m. each day, ... It has
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Fiorello H. La Guardia has a different article title. Best Wishes,
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Thanks for the source review. I've addressed all the points above.
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Ref 87: The ref cites p 1087 but the book has less than 500 pages.
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Interesting read. A well-written article overall. Comments below:
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Steady Eg, patience is a virtue. I make it five prose supports.
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Done a quick second spot-check and didn't spot further issues.
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only included because the sources mentioned these appearances.
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I removed this, also because I forgot which source said this.
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I didn't realize the typo existed. I've replaced the source.
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Overall, there's very little to critique here. Best Wishes,
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rather than constructing a beach or clearing the waterfront.
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A little confused if it should be ipe or ipĂȘ Best Wishes,
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writing exercises: but these plans were modified in 1939
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I've also cited page 801 - thanks for pointing this out.
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I've added it. I thought the borough was there already.
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to the beach at intervals of every â1 1â2 blocks --: -->
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m the pier: "There is - caps not needed. Best Wishes,
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Done, and I also checked the other instances of this.
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Looks good for now. Change to support. Best Wishes,
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Thanks for the comments. I have addressed them now.
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Thanks for the comments. I have addressed them now.
2391:West 37th Street pipes to a redirect. Best Wishes,
2783:The above discussion is preserved as an archive.
1761:Replace with "The boardwalk extension was slated
1536:and is held in place by around two dozen groynes.
1430:resorts at both Coney Island and Rockaway Beach.
844:Thanks! I've addressed all these comments now.
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1675:will conduct another prose readthrough later.
885:, looks like it's just you to go on this one.
813:Very nice work, and what a complete history !
248:writing exercises). Samples: The boardwalk is
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1748:these changes would revitalize Coney Island's
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1952:Sounds good. I've removed two of the three
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2264:Yes, I think it meets sourcing criteria.
1718:be known as the "Coney Island Boardwalk".
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2742:Closing note
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2279:Support by
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2124:Daily Eagle
1985:interludes.
1803:for repairs
1731:the time of
1204:WP:NEWSBLOG
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220:issues, no
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2744:: This
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1373:Comments
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1914:BKLYNER
1866:support
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1147:Fixed.
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230:MOS:LQ
133:Images
58:FACBot
2603:Done.
2498:Done.
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195:2020.
191:2020.
166:Sandy
112:Tdslk
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