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I was always sure the lyrics were "there's no point in living if you cant feel alive", however I listened to the song again and it's undoubtedly "there's no point in living if you cant feel a life" as the article states. However the actors make reference to this line several times and it's the former
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Cocktail, David Arnold spoke of the challenges in creating a Bond score" should be linked I
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This article is good. I was expecting a stubby article when I saw this in the list, however it is very comprehensive and well written. There are a few things needing cleanup/attention.
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I have answered these issues below, so why oppose now?
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