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There's too much uncited text in the article, at least six paragraphs. Refs are not presented in a consistent way - citations and used works should be separated, for instance. There's 1 ref without a title, only the authors (Lê Vinh Quốc, Nguyễn Thị Thư, Lê Phụng Hoàng??). There's 2 mondediplo
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had a mania about round hats, so his police would tear people's round hats off their heads and burn the offending items in the street. Thousands were arrested. And doesn't that
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Sentences 2 and 4 of Paragraph 1 should be combined and reduced. "In what is widely regarded as the greatest victory achieved by Napoleon" should be mixed into Sentence 5.
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Err yeah, sorry about that, I've got a lot of the sources (or others, sometimes, in their place), but I haven't looked at the napoleonic period for ages and had
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I am nominating this featured article for review because it was highlighed as not meeting the FA criteria more than 4 months ago
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The tags, inconsistent ref formatting, and unsourced notes are enough not to meet the FA criteria. (
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I'm dealing with the citations: they are the least insurmountable of the problems this article has.
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The lead image is very high quality and high encyclopedic value. It could be a featured picture. (
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citations without authors. I also spotted the use of a primary source (Tolstoy's
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can you take a look and comment here on whether this should be delisted or kept?
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The recurring lack of citations in this article is unacceptable. –
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Further comments should be made on the article's talk page or at
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and there have not been significant improvements since.
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Issues in the review section largely concern sourcing.
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