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Criterion 1c issues: Almost all sources are from BEST, giving me the feeling that this reads like an advertisement. In addition, there are a number of paragraphs without citations.
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random example: "BEST also earns revenues by way of advertisements on its buses and bus-stops, and through rent from offices on owned properties" -: -->
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Criterion 3 issues: Questionable PD claims for the images in the "History" section. There's no evidence that these images were published 60 years ago.
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Suggested FA criteria concern are citations, biased sources, POV, prose, comprehensiveness, alt text. Also note the recent change to
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Are the bus services coordinated with trains so that passengers can transfer efficiently?
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It only takes about 10 minutes to do that review....It might take 20 hours to fix it
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Info on governance? Board of directors? How does the government exert control?
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This 2006 FA promotion has issues with criteria 1a, 1b, 1c and 3.
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Further comments should be made on the article's talk page or at
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No efforts were made to address FA criteria concerns.
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Brihanmumbai Electric Supply and Transport
Nishkid64
Make articles, not wikidrama
15:35, 12 July 2009 (UTC)
WP:ALT
Eubulides
talk
20:39, 15 July 2009 (UTC)
WP:WIAFA
FAQ?
YellowMonkey
cricket photo poll!
paid editing=POV
02:29, 27 July 2009 (UTC)
Dabomb87
talk
02:48, 27 July 2009 (UTC)
Nishkid64
Make articles, not wikidrama
03:00, 31 July 2009 (UTC)
JKBrooks85
talk
10:40, 1 August 2009 (UTC)
Tony
(talk)

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