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Go ahead and move it. Given how FA's have changed in nearly over a year, I think that what I done here is not enough for what is being asked for today. And admitedly, I cannot find much about this title, given that Belarus is a country that does not have much good information on small subjects like
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As stated before, there is a lot more information that FA's need now that I cannot provide with this article. The English sounds weird, and that is my fault. The article is a bit disorganized, but that is my fault there too. It was good while it lasted, but I am not upset at it being demoted, at
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redundant, and is not at all incorrect. Any problem is purely technical, and rather irrelevant. Some of the paragraphs are rather stubby, it's true, so I think FARC is not out of the question, but many of the critiques are critical to the point of being ridiculous.
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Criterion 2a is no longer satisfied, if it ever was, and the article needs a major audit for language and structure. In particular, I noted the following problems as representative of broader issues that need to be addressed if this is to remain a FA.
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For a FA, it is of questionable comprehensiveness (2b): nothing about the political/social context of the award, and whether it has equivalents in other ex-Soviet countries. How is it different from the Soviet-period awards?
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I quickly moved it to FARC per the request of Zscout370 who is the writer of this article in IRC, and the review is very unlikely to be fixed I would vote
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as per above, including Zscout, who has graciously agreed that the article does not meet current FA standards.
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I think the idea is that it goes to FARC only after its two-week major review. Correct me if I'm wrong.
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Samirat: "... still living today" is perfectly valid. While it may be slightly redundant, it doesn't
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today?), an idle "various", "Photo of ..." in the caption, which is pretty obvious, and much more.
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Wrongly formatted bullets (it's a single sentence, so should be formatted accordingly—or is it?).
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There are many redundancies; e.g., "seven recipients still living today" (still
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I would move it to FARC, few refs, rather stubby, and missing sections. Thanks
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I'll probably spruce it up now and see if it works for
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Knowledge (XXG):Featured article review
Hero of Belarus
no longer a featured article
Tony
15:35, 11 June 2006 (UTC)
Jaranda

05:33, 12 June 2006 (UTC)
Tony
13:17, 12 June 2006 (UTC)
User:Zscout370
06:14, 17 June 2006 (UTC)
Jaranda

21:52, 18 June 2006 (UTC)
User:Zscout370
22:05, 18 June 2006 (UTC)
Tony
09:47, 25 June 2006 (UTC)
WP:GA
User:Zscout370
20:06, 25 June 2006 (UTC)
Tony
Todor

Bozhinov
15:56, 2 July 2006 (UTC)

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