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181:, the chief Indian official in charge of the affairs, and it has been replicated by scholars in a nominal way. But the article suggests that there was substantive "integration", when it starts talking about "reasons for integration" etc. If the "integration" is a fresh phenomenon that didn't exist during the British Raj, that needs to be substantiated. -- 123:
I am nominating this featured article for review because the issues Buidhe mentioned on the talk page haven't been addressed. There's a fair amount of uncited text, and sourcing more generally is also a concern: the article relies heavily on
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outlined problems on the talk page about the use of primary sources and Indian nationalist POV (of which I am not knowledgeable enough to comment about, which is why I am pinging them).
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The point I made was that the notion of "integration" (by independent India) is insufficiently explained. The term comes from
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aren't cited at all). Other issues include a too-short lead and a large number of duplicate links.
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Issues raised in the review section include sourcing, coverage and style.
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Further comments should be made on the article's talk page or at
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Political integration of India
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Extraordinary Writ
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