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It's not an issue of counting sources or "enough to get by": it's a question of whether everything that should be cited, is cited. As an example, last time I looked at it, the lead said 1,189 something, when the refs I found said 1,200 - could be rounding, we need to know. Also, I couldn't verify
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National Park Service public domain cited; normally, the lead isn't cited, but since the text came directly from the NPS, I went ahead and cited it. That's probably all I can do for now.
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I'm noticing that most of the article was taken verbatim from the public domain (National Park
Service), which means it must be cited to those websites it was taken from - for others working on the cites, look first there or via google.
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This is getting close. 89% wilderness needs to be cited (hard to verify), and most of
History is uncited. There's a huge amount of work to be done on units of measurment - all need a non-breaking hardspace.
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It does look like we can cite a lot of it from the websources (which are quality sources) already there - sorry for all the edit conflicts, I was trying to get a basic ref structure in place.
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I think that this article is well put together. It seems that, given the cursory glance I made, it is well put together, flows nicely, and has enough sources to get by.
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