266:"The Draft took place on two days: the first day was televised lived for three hours on April 13 on WWE's program Raw, on the USA Network in the United States; the second part, the "Supplemental Draft", was held on April 15 on the Internet, at WWE's official website." - this feels like a really long run-on. Though grammatically correct, aside from the comments above, it seems too lengthy with the colon and semicolon connecting. I might split out the broadcast devices into a seperate sentence. Example:
160:, but not entirely. Unlike the other FL, this is set up a bit different and I hope it is more comprehensible. It was copyedit by Mattisse and Nikki (thanks alot), so hopefully only few mistakes are found. Happy reviewing. Note: I don't think stability will be an issue since the event is completely over now, and will not be affected heavily by future events.--
273:"Twelve were made on television: Raw (five), SmackDown (four), and ECW (one). Twenty-four were made during the Supplemental Draft: SmackDown (10), Raw (nine), ECW (five)." - these sentences aren't grammatically correct. If you remove the parenthetical phrases, the sentences don't mean anything. Suggest
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