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A tropical cyclone has a core that is warmer than the surrounding environment, and it's a system not attached to any cold fronts. Extratropical transition means it loses that warm core and becomes attached to a front. As someone studying meteorology, the article conveys that fine to me, but it may be
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The 2001 Atlantic hurricane season will forever be overshadowed by the years that would soon follow it, but the season produced some notable tropical cyclones such as
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I'd switch around the two sentences in the last lede paragraph. I'd also avoid starting both with "This timeline" and using "operationally" (already a pretty ambiguous word) twice in the same line.
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I changed it to "It includes information that was not released throughout the season..." Better?
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