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Can you please explain why you're nominating this article for GAR? You have provided no reason anywhere that I can see – you didn't respond to my post on your talk page and you haven't explained here. Why do you feel that this article doesn't meet the criteria?
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You don't need to apologize. The article needed work, and has been improved as a consequence of this reassessment. I have a good feeling that this reassessment will end happily, and soon :)
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Thanks. I've copyedited the rest and added a couple of wikilinks early on. Please check if I have introduced any errors or inaccuracies. I only know professional wrestling through GA :)
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He holds the record for the most pins in a season, and the record is 30 pins. I agree that the phrasing could use a little fine-tuning. Can you think of another way to say this?
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