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are quite spacious even after contextual image usage. Whereas here we don't have space. As to being an article or a list i couldn't find any previous discussions related to awards. There have been similar discussions somewhere for List-of-episodes with no definite conclusion. But still majority of
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On the first look not bad, but after reading one section I believe it needs a good copyedit. One issue is that you are using repetitions, for example in "Awards not given" (where you use "given" in each sentence and even in the head). In some places the prose is awkward. Check whether it meets
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It also has to be trimmed. The Dadasaheb Phalke award is mentioned thrice in different paragraphs, while it could be made into a single sentence. Adding to that, the sentence "Deool became third Marathi film to win the honour after Shyamchi Aai (1953) and Shwaas (2003)" is heavily
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Agree! Will work on copyediting and rephrasing. However, as Vivvt and i have worked on this article from quite a good time our minds (at least mine) are not able to find any phrasing issues. Will still try, but it would be nice if you all could give more examples. Regarding
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I've listed this article for peer review because it has got potential to become a FL. If reviews goes well, I wish to push this article for WP:FLC. I would appreciate if senior editors can review the article accordingly, considering its goal.
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such pages are under lists. I could not find any year-wise award related page under "article". Even if the content has more prose, the basic page is a list of awards. But if consensus is different i am okay with categorizing it that way. §§
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I'm not really sure if it would find a place in the references, but now that it has been proved to be verifiable, there should not be any issue.
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Isn't the lead supposed to be restricted to four paragraphs? It looks like it needs to be condensed quite a bit before presentation.
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listed under External links: Official websites. Do you want me to put it as a part of references as well? -
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by award category (prefer): Dadasaheb Phalke, Feature films, non-feature films, best writing
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Enajori.com incident is not part of selection. Separate into "controversy" or something
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Awards not given: is it known if entries were suited for each of the categories?
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Section is too long. Split into different 4 sections by award category IMO. --
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DFF publishes list of entries submitted for the awards like done earlier for
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Why is /- needed after all prize money amounts? Remove
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