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So looking at the sources, they seem to be reliable. Kotaku, Engadget, Destructoid check out. Though, unless its in a different language other than
English, you don't have to add in the pipe what language it is. Especially since Engadget is in English and not Turkish. Also the subreddit in the
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This article is short because it is on a simple game, but I would still like some feedback after rewriting it to weed out the poor-quality content, before nominating it for good article status.
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How about, "Agar.io has received a generally positive reception"? Although words like "generally" are too vague to be all that helpful, so it would be even better to avoid it altogether.
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if it is copyrighted, as it is simple enough to click on the external link to the game. I have doubts over if the design is even original enough, though.
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I'm not sure this is the best way to phrase this, but I'm drawing a blank. I'll think about it and get back to you if I think of something better.
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Avoid "according to" when you can; how about, "Valadares told
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I'll take a look at this soon. I recommend getting a screenshot of the gameplay to illustrate how it looks.
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