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3. Districts govern some, but not all inhabited localities. Both Adygea's cities are not in jurisdiction of any district, and it is theoretically possible that any other inhabited locality (urban or rural) may be subordinated directly to the Republic. The grouping is thus in accordance with the
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I don't actually care for the table designs under the "List of administrative and municipal divisions" heading. They are too big for the information that they display, and there is too much white space. Consider sizing them down - for example, there is a huge column that displays one number.
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5. The design of those table, unfortunately, is another source of frustraction. I will happily re-design them if anyone has ideas as to what exactly will work for them. Could you, please, clarify, which cells you believe would benefit from
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4. The reason why identations were used instead of different level headings was because there are too many nested sections. When headings are used, the font of the deepest ones is almost smaller than the font used in the body
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The subheadings under "Rural localities" need to be visually distinct, not just indented - it is hard to discern if the hierarchy is just visual to separate listings or if they are intended to be smaller subsections of Rural
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A peer review is requested because the list was so significantly expanded and reworked that it would be wrong to just replace old contents with a new draft without subjecting it to public scrutiny first.
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4. I think we had tried every possible formatting there is, and identation so far worked the best. If you have suggestions as to exactly what else can be tried, you are very welcome to voice them here.
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The Administrative division structure" is not really a logical hierarchy. You say that the district governs the inhabited localities, but they are given the same hierarchical level as the district.
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The new History section needs some attention paid to its visual chunking - it looks bad on the page. Too many small paragraphs. It would look better grouped into larger sections for readability.
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The summary table of units of administrative division is great. Just move it to the right (just add align=right next to class="db-d2lraXRhYmxl") so that there is no huge empty space on the right.
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2. I am planning to expand the History section a bit more. However, I am not sure how to bundle the smaller chunks into larger ones, as they are grouped by time periods.
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I really don't like ==Rural localities== Source: . You should put that after sentences taken from that source (it's ok tuo cite the same source 50 times :)
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The new infobox is WAY better. It is a much neater table that displays the information in a more concise and useful fashion.
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There is no need to bold things like "municipal urban okrug of the city of Maykop" or "municipal urban settlements"
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I really don't like all those intendations. I think different size headings are just fine and do job well enough.
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1. I am not sure what else could be included in the lead, and, in my opinion, its length is just right.
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5. We tried to cite the same source multiple times. The output, in my view, is almost unreadable (
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Overall great work and I would still support it for Featured List status after the rework. --
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Sources: 1897–2002: 2007: should be incorporated with the table (extra row at the bottom)
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This is a somewhat unusual request for a peer review, because it deals with an already
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a new large section on administrative division structure has been added;
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7. Why not? They emphasize the most important concept in each passage.
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content of district composition sections has been expanded.
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layout of district composition sections has been changed;
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Consider using shading for better visual presentation.
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Hello and great job on this article. Some feedback:
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Law of Adygea on Administrative-Territorial Division
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3. The summary table is now right-aligned. Better?
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Knowledge (XXG):Peer review
Administrative divisions of Adygea
Administrative divisions of Adygea/update
featured list
administrative divisions of Adygea
current version
updated version
Ă‹zhiki (Igels HĂ©rissonovich ĂŹzhakoff-Amursky)
yo?
19:31, 15 March 2007 (UTC)
User talk:Ezhiki#Adygea
Renata
00:38, 4 April 2007 (UTC)
this revision
Ă‹zhiki (Igels HĂ©rissonovich ĂŹzhakoff-Amursky)
yo?
17:34, 13 April 2007 (UTC)
Mus Musculus
talk
16:25, 13 April 2007 (UTC)
Ă‹zhiki (Igels HĂ©rissonovich ĂŹzhakoff-Amursky)
yo?
17:49, 13 April 2007 (UTC)

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