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copyright owner would have been the proprietor, and I'm not too sure who it was at that date. It was probably a George
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2405:"This was the last private England team to tour Australia, with subsequent ones playing under the colours of the MCC." This may not be completely true. It was the last private team to Australia that played first-class matches, but I am sure there have been other private, minor tours to Australia. Maybe worth tweaking the wording a little.
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Almanack). Senior civil servants, e.g. the
Assistant Secretary to the Navy, got £1200 a year or less. "Some sources claim" may not be sufficient grounds to introduce the figure. Perhaps: "Surviving records do not indicate his salary, but some sources suggest he was paid comfortably more than Lancashire's leading professionals."
2720:"As MacLaren's reputation suffered in the rest of the season, blame began to be apportioned to him, particularly after England heavily lost the game." The chronology of this sentence is muddled; surely the logical sequence is: first he lost the game, then got blamed, then his reputation suffered during the rest of the season.
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That's about it. I can't say I ended up liking him – there aren't many redeeming features to set off against what seems like massive arrogance and irresponsibility. One thing in his favour is that he wasn't a cricket establishment man – I suppose we can be grateful for that. Definitely not a villain
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I have grave doubts about the £40 a week claim by "some sources"; that was a very high salary then, and not just "comfortably more than
Lancashire's leading professionals", but about ten times what they were paid. £40 a week is what an Admiral or a Major-general was paid in 1900 (source: Whittaker's
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The sources are united that he was not as good as everyone expected given his talent. Additionally (and with apologies to Tim!) Lancashire's batting was not amazing in this period. In fact, it was pretty awful so topping the averages was not perhaps the greatest achievement. And the sources call him
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Potential problem here. Some digging reveals that E Hawkins was not the photographer, but the name of the company, named after the late proprietor. I suspect that the photograph would have been registered with the photographer's name, but that is not available and is likely unrecorded anymore. The
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I've listed this article for peer review because I am aiming to take it to FAC. MacLaren was an interesting and rather stormy former
England cricket captain. As usual, I'm looking for accessibility to non-cricketers, padding and over detailing (as usual, I'm worried about the length), and general
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I think this is relative. The family were not exactly impoverished, I don't think, if they could send three sons to Harrow. Also, professional bowlers were paid a pittance, and had some responsibility to bowl at club members in the nets. I suspect that they would not have been paid a lot, or for
2582:"...he declined to put Middlesex's batsmen under pressure when chasing a small but challenging total to win the game; this may have arisen from his dislike of Lord's and the figures in authority there". Am I understanding this correctly? He effectively threw a game and allowed Middlesex to win,
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Although I hesitate to suggest more words, I feel a (very) brief explanation is required (perhaps in a footnote) of the circumstances whereby MacLaren was appointed to the Test captaincy in Grace's place. As I recall, Grace's age (almost 51) was an issue, as was the question of whether MacLaren
2380:"During 1901, MacLaren recruited a team to tour Australia the following winter, having been invited to do so by the Melbourne Cricket Club." Somewhat clumsily phrased; perhaps "MacLaren was invited by the Melbourne Cricket Club to bring a team to Australia during the English winter of 1901–02".
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The structure of the prose needs looking at. The sentence about MacLaren's unpopularity shouldn't appear in the middle of a discussion on his merits as a captain. I also think that, since about half of the section is about the captaincy issue, the title "Style and technique" is probably not
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Opinions were divided over his captaincy, but he was a deep thinker on the game and critics believed him to be tactically advanced. However, his pessimism, clashes with the selectors and inability to get the best out of his players led most commentators to rate him a poor leader. - but...
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That article isn't the finest, so take it with a pinch of salt, especially for this period. I could name plenty of amateurs in similar positions, including C. B. Fry, the captain of
England in 1912, and Ranjitsinhji an Indian "Prince" (albeit a fake, broke and largely fraudulent one).
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in 1957: "It is disillusioning to one with my youthful loyalties to realise that the majestic MacLaren, with his 'superb crease-side manner', was an extremely stupid, prejudiced and pig-headed man, even in cricket matters. Plum always says he had the worst fault of a captain,
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I've added a link to draw, but a draw in cricket is not the same as a tie. A game is drawn when time runs out, so a team could be hundreds of runs behind with the last batsmen at the wicket, and if time runs out it is a draw. Therefore, a team can be very dominant.
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The last two sentences are a bit magaziney. I would cut them down to a neutral summary: "On the six-week outward journey MacLaren met (Kathleen) Maud Power, an
Australian socialite and the daughter of a horse racing official. They were married on..." (give
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This was in an earlier version of the article, as I mentioned to Tim, but I removed it for reasons of space. But it's an interesting story (although probably a fabrication by C. B. Fry, who liked to embellish his part in affairs) so I've put it in a note.
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Duplicate links: No-balled (#Full-time cricketer), George Hirst (#Ashes series of 1902), Neville Cardus (#Replacement as
England captain), Colin Blythe (#Return as England captain), Bill Ponsford (#Coach and senior figure), batting crease (#Style and
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consistent but he only averaged 25 that season, and in the mid-20s in each of these seasons. Would it be easier to give his batting averages for these seasons? I was trying to avoid just listing averages again, but perhaps it's unavoidable here.
1809:"become his personal secretary" – Later you call him "Private secretary to Ranjitsinhji", and I think the latter must be right: a personal secretary does dictation and typing; a private secretary is an influential confidant and assistant.
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Not really. He scored from shots which carried little risk, but he did so at a fast pace. Bradman did something similar, and batsmen do it all the time in one-day matches now: scoring at a run a ball but not taking the remotest chance.
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in the Allen mould. I think the article does him justice; if it were my creation I'd probably not give his seasonal performance figures for every season, but maybe some find those figures helpful. I'll keep an eye open for the FAC.
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Full-time cricketer: "Yorkshire's
Wilfred Rhodes and George Hirst were not permitted to tour by their captain Lord Hawke. Hawke...". Try not to have the name repeat from the end of one sentence to the start of another like this.
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He batted effectively for the rest of the season, finishing with 713 runs for Lancashire at 54.85; his batting was praised but his absences may have prevented the team from winning the Championship; they finished second. - Three
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Among the miscellany of MacLaren's money-making activities is the information that he "briefly owned a hotel". How could someone so obviously skint and in debt manage to acquire a hotel? Or was he managing it on someone else's
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As I indicate above, there is no explanation in the source, and my reading of it is that it was on behalf of his father, as that was his father's business. I'm wondering should we just cut this as it is hardly that relevant.
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Can't think of anything short of actually putting that down in writing. Or, last I checked, in the UK a copyright where only a company is credited was considered anonymous in terms of duration, so PD-anon-1923 might
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Actually, it was. He specifically only wanted amateurs and no beastly professionals; given that this was 1920s England, it was obviously a huge deal that they won. I've reworked to make this a little more explicit.
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MacLaren had the modesty to say, comparing himself with Victor Trumper, "I was supposed to be a batsman in the Grand Manner. Compared to Victor, I was as a cab-horse to a Derby winner." Quoted in Vernon Scanell,
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It would work just as well to say "ceased to play first-class cricket regularly", but to me it sounds better as it is. It this an Engvar thing? I'll change it if it's a big issue, but would prefer to leave it.
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To be honest, despite his less-than-great reputation, and the fact that I was prepared to dislike him, I can't help liking Old Archie, somehow. I like that Trumper quote. I might have to add it somewhere.
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The choice of "moderately" successful is odd, since he topped the 1892 avearges, "scored consistently" in 1893 and won representative honours. What would he have needed to do to be called "successful"?
2060:"But MacLaren's financial constraints kept him at the District Bank". I am struggling with this wording. The "But" should definitely go, and I think "circumstances" would be better than "constraints".
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I suggest rephrasing the opening sentence: "MacLaren's teaching duties meant that in 1897 he again missed the start of the cricket season, and he felt it necessary to resign as Lancashire's captain".
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should return to the team. When it was decided that MacLaren should be in the side, Grace stood down to make way for him. The selectors then made Archie captain, for the reasons which you give.
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In the 1940s, his health began to fail. He was hurt in a car crash and then contracted cancer. - How hurt? Any more details? Cripes, talk about going out with a mewl. Not a pretty fate. —
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A little harsh, and the game would probably have been lost anyway. But yes. I wonder how far he took it. Maybe he just went through the motions and the source embellishes this. But he
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I much appreciate "Albert Cotter". You could call him "Albert 'Tibby' Cotter" if you want to appease the cricket community. But I would definitely move the title of the Cotter article.
1267:"his ridiculous private secretary" - Hmm... not as barbed as Tim's quotes below, but when one gets the legal system to comment like this one must be doing something devilishly well.
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Ha! I was thinking of you when I did that one. To be honest, I doubt the cricket community is paying much attention, and is not too bothered even if they have heard of Mr Cotter.
2142:"Approached to organise a touring team by the Australian cricket authorities of Victoria and New South Wales..." Unnecessary detail - "Australian cricket authorities" is enough
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I had this in and took it out again as it seemed a digression. It is a good story, but I think it may be a better story about CB Fry than MacLaren. I'll ponder a little more.
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he later clashed with committee members unhappy with his decision to use the money to buy a motor car. - Subject of the preceding sentence was "Lancashire". Suggest ", who..."
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It does in the source too, where there is no explanation. Speculating, maybe his father wanted him to go into his business. But I can add nothing more here that is sourced.
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With the bat, MacLaren's only score over fifty was that in the second Test, and he finished the series with 164 runs at 32.80. - Why do you include "With the bat," here?
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Hmm. I'm reluctant to go into too much detail here, as it is tangential to MacLaren, but needs including as he was a lone voice defending Mold. I'd prefer to leave it.
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The wedding attracted media attention and was well-attended. - Glad to see we're not tiptoeing around his wife like last time. Do the sources give attendance figures?
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I love Tim's first quote, but I'm not sure it's a notable enough opinion from a cricket viewpoint, no matter how true it is! But I love the contempt in this quote!
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If you don't mind "but" at the beginning of a sentence, alright. However, I'm concerned that there are more than a few such uses (I see two already in #Test debut)
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Perhaps, but not all of our readers know cricket. "MacLaren kept him bowling for a long period until the player tired and was easily punished by the batsmen." —
1942:: This is the first half of my observations and suggestions concerning this article. I have been making minor corrections/amendments as I have gone along:
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In Early life, the last sentence of the second paragraph will likely be the source of a citation request during the FAC, so you may as well add one now.
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summoned Sydney Barnes from Manchester to play instead of either. - Thought they couldn't stand each other. Also, why do you include his first name?
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and he travelled to India with him during the winter of 1904–05. - Since we have two different men in this sentence, this clause may be confusing.
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I've cut some, but not sure about others where I feel they may be required for clarity. Are there any obvious clangers which could be cut?
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from first ball of the match, to become the first person dismissed by the first ball of a Test. - repetition of first. Also, first person
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2936:"He was hurt in a car crash and then contracted cancer." I imagine there are dates for the crash, and perhaps for the onset of cancer.
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I think because it illustrates that when MacLaren DID have money, he (to put it bluntly!) pissed it away, and this is a good example.
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You'd think so, wouldn't you. But nothing in his biography (another slightly strange cricket biography) nor anywhere else I can see.
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It seems obscure. The source is cryptic too, and while it hints that MacLaren messed up, it is scarce on detail. I've reworded this.
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You should acknowledge that there was a second Test, even though it only lasted a couple of hours (A.C. MacLaren not out 47)
1833:"when fast bowler Claude Buckenham…" – touch of the tabloids here; "when the fast bowler Claude Buckenham… would be better
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Second tour of Australia: "did not hear the umpires call and was run out when he left his crease." "umpires" → "umpire's".
2111:"MacLaren studied cotton manufacture in New Orleans" - on behalf of the bank, perhaps? An explanatory phrase would help.
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Final cricket matches: Another case of close name repetition in "with the cricket writer J. N. Pentalow. Pentalow...".
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I'll see what I can do. Crisco was OK with it above, but I'll see if I can get hold of a Beldam image of him batting.
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drawn with England in a dominant position. - Wouldn't a draw be both at the same score? How could England be dominant?
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Was it odd that MacLaren was an amateur but not of a rich family or noble background?
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I also get carried away with semi colons. Fixed. 20:44, 14 June 2013 (UTC)
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All done. Took the second Hawke sentence out as it wasn't adding much.
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Ha, that made me chuckle! And thanks for the comments and kind words.
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I imagine there is a w/link for the 1921 Australian touring side.
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Either is OK here, but "school" is more common in this context.
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Done. I've not given the full date as this is mentioned later.
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Can we have the year of his first appearance in Eton v Harrow?
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F. S. Jackson - You refer to him as Stanley above. Confusing.
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Note 8: Is the hyphen in "fellow-Gloucestershire" needed?
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PS: I said I knew a couple of nice things about MacLaren:
2522:"by one wicket in a close finish" - some tautology there?
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strong bowling available. - or strong bowlers available?
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Arrrgghh. Minefield! I prefer to avoid this these days!
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Eastbourne Cricket Club - Notable enough for a redlink?
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MacLaren was born - the second son born... - repetition
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1729:"a wine merchants" – the plural looks a bit odd to me
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Well, I only counted two! Changed the first one now.
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412:I quite like this one, and would like to keep it.
1392:Not really. A useful book but not a notable one.
306:But wet weather - At the beginning of a sentence?
998:- How can you claim PD-70 without a death date?
204:regular first-class cricket - meaning not clear
1486:Be careful of repeating "Lancashire" too much.
466:Clumsy phrasing. Reworded; is it any better?
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1752:, but am not sure, that this needs a hyphen
1732:And to me, so not sure what I was thinking.
405:But MacLaren's financial constraints - again
150:This peer review discussion has been closed.
1292:second innings. In the second innings - ...
3017:"effective ... effective" in the same line
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1507:One cannot repeat "Lancashire" too much.
154:prose issues. All comments appreciated.
434:; - this seems to come out of left field
617:£100 advance - Value in today's pounds?
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2444:Thanks for the first lot of comments.
599:Removed one; I do tend to overuse it.
2615:"By January 1907" → "In January 1907"
2429:The rest will follow in a day or so.
1899:, attributing the phrase to C B Fry.)
1661:Borrowed one from the Hobbs article.
1249:Just started a new sentence instead.
1075:and can be safely copied to Commons.
484:lots of use of the word "prestigious"
362:Amateur status in first-class cricket
360:One doesn't get that impression from
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1461:their 36 games. - Semicolons abound.
2174:Oh well! Worth a try! Removed now.
1702:Appointment and start of captaincy
534:But his successful leadership - ...
2317:Appointment and start of captaincy
1748:"His highest profile success" – I
1410:Lionel Robinson's team - Who's he?
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2577:Private secretary to Ranjitsinhji
2030:also ... also" in third paragraph
1905:Sporting Literature—An Anthology
342:poor amateurs weren't uncommon.
1951:I imagine that MacLaren snr was
1726:Replacement as England captain
1385:- Notable enough for a redlink?
2799:"a lot of" is not encyclopedic
2547:Replacement as England captain
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1836:Yes, missed that one. Done.
1360:Thanks, used your wording.
1217:the negative tactics - Huh?
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3108:Thanks for all your help.
1830:Return as England captain
1679:standing on his own wicket
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2262:Second tour of Australia
1987:Reworked this a little.
1102:Otherwise quite good. —
1602:Comments from Tim riley
3236:June 2013 peer reviews
2968:None that I can find.
2961:Cause of wife's death?
1069:File:MacLaren 1905.jpg
559:although MacLaren was
541:Re-ordered this part.
2824:Final cricket matches
2230:chosen to play..."; "
1940:Brianboulton comments
1655:Lancashire cricketer
18:Knowledge:Peer review
2467:Ashes series of 1902
2055:Lancashire cricketer
1383:The World of Cricket
3124:Giants2008 comments
2986:Style and technique
2349:Full-time cricketer
2221:World record holder
815:Not sure. Removed.
1907:(1987), p. 254 –
957:Skipping ahead...
865:Tweaked and done.
3049:Sorted, I think.
174:from Crisco 1492
142:Watch peer review
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2067:Tweaked a bit.
649:Yes, reworded.
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2905:Final years
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1893:James Agate
1631:Early life
1558:Crisco 1492
1344:Crisco 1492
1104:Crisco 1492
1032:Crisco 1492
432:New Orleans
366:Crisco 1492
104:visual edit
3186:Giants2008
3140:Giants2008
2806:Reworded.
2504:Cut most.
2137:Test debut
1955:treasurer?
1946:Early life
1774:Reworded.
1299:Reworded.
1199:Reworded.
1117:technique)
1071:is likely
516:Reworded.
3207:Sarastro1
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3230:Category
1953:Honorary
1882:This is
1509:Verb sap
1030:work. —
179:however.
172:Comments
157:Thanks,
3024:Fixed.
2911:behalf?
2037:Fixed.
1468:Fixed.
1174:Fixed.
127:history
108:history
94:Article
36:Toolbox
2861:Done.
2622:Done.
2595:really
2479:Done.
2387:Done.
2299:Done.
2274:Done.
2244:Done.
2149:Done.
2012:Done.
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1124:Done.
987:Images
915:Done.
699:Done.
561:caught
237:Done.
186:Done.
2781:Cut.
2752:Cut.
2196:date)
1897:Ego 9
1750:think
1613:Cut.
1607:Lead
136:Watch
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