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I removed it because, as per above, its pointless. Nothing could be explained more but just rumors, here and there. But the section appears on the page right now as my and another user is having a slight "edit war".
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Yah. They're all filled up. Some do not have publication dates, but surely they all have accessdates, excluding offline sources. Some do not have publishers, as they appear to be the same with the work parameter.
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That Austin Powers screenshot needs to be commented upon, as in discuss her appearance in the pic or something. As of now it does not significantly increase our understanding of the prose to merit inclusion.
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Ya know i dont even need to continue, this is easily GA, id stick it up for nomination if i were you. Just sort out those bloody captions, they hurt my eye's. ;-]
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I first caption still burns my eyes. Dont color coordinate them. Just say left to right , shelly, betty, sam and fred..
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