214:"Wearing naval uniform, Empress Elizabeth escorted the botik." The connection of this sentence to the context is missing for me. I'm not very familiar with Russian history so perhaps that's the problem but I don't see how this sentence relates to the marriage of Catherine the Great. I understand Elizabeth was the mother of Catherine but if this is in reference to the actual wedding ceremony perhaps a bit more here would help clarify that.
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I know this has been archived, but I just wanted to say thank you all for your comments. I probably won't address them until school is done. I still plan on bringing this to FAC, but I'm hoping to find more information about its history under the Soviet Union and under the
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These are the only things I found in the article - all a bit nit picky. It looks to be in good shape. The external links check out. I didn't do a dab check, so if that hasn't been done I suggest doing that before nominating. Otherwise good luck!
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Well done! The overall article includes an interesting and summarizing lead, which comes across the reader as very engaging and professionally written. The article is relevant and focused on the topic at hand for the full length while maintaining
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saying the importance of Peter the Great and everything associated with him, including the botik. Not sure it just seems a bit awkwardly worded and could be snagged at FAC.
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