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I have a question about the "biography" word choice in this part: (Cohen decided that rather than creating a traditional biography) I have more often seen the word associated with a book rather than a movie or a script. Would biographical film or biopic be more suitable here? I could be over-thinking
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I've done some minor rewording to touch on this issue. Let me know if you think it needs more or if it should be done differently. I don't think it's worth mentioning minor inaccuracies in the lead, such as that plot elements were condensed, as it's my understanding that's quite common in
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I think this poses a bit of an issue, as her name in the film is Linda Lee, though at the time point she is introduced in the film her name would have been Linda Emery. I feel like calling her Linda Lee would be anachronistic, and calling her Linda Emery would be confusing for the
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For this part, (haunting a young Bruce, and subsequently enrolls Bruce under the tutelage), I would change the second instance of "Bruce" to "him" as I think it would be understood from context, and it would cut down on the amount of times "Bruce" is said in the
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I am uncertain if the citations in the infobox are needed as the budget and box office should also be mentioned and sourced in the body of the article. I have seen it done for some featured articles, like
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I've listed this article for peer review because I'd like feedback on what to improve before nominating it for FAC. I will happily return the favour by reviewing any nomination of your choice.
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Wonderful work with the article. This is what I have noticed from my first read-through. Let me know if any of comments require further clarification. Have a great rest of your week!
463:"Bruce works as a dishwasher at a Chinese restaurant, until getting in a violent brawl with four of the cooks." - perhaps it could be stated "until he gets in a violent brawl..."
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If the citations are kept in the infobox, I would add a citation for the running time, as I do not see it supported in the body of the article.
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Thanks for your comments, they are much appreciated. I've implemented all but the last one which I'd rather keep as is for the time being. :)
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