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on the shore, nor is it within sight of the Sound. Please provide a quote from the source, and I may be able to help you fix it … the home where they stayed in
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Are you still interested in getting comments on this PR? If so, I suggest promoting this PR at various
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Yes, I'm still interested in co-nominating this for FAC. I shall close this Peer Review now. Feel free to submit the FAC nomination at your convenience during the next few days, and I shall be active throughout the nomination process. —
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Thank you for your support! Per your comment, I've removed "Paul Elgin" from the infobox as
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