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The merchandise section is much improved. Although a bit long for a video game article, it should be just fine. However, you may want to add the spoiler warning tags around the "Story" section. As it stands, it doesn't have any, and details the events of the entire game. It should either be marked as
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The WikiProject has been working on another article. Basically, we've been chipping away at it for quite some time, and I'm bringing it here to get some fresh eyes. In my opinion, all that's left is a solid copy-edit, and perhaps a slight expansion in the development and reception sections. Fire
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I am a reviewer, so I should say that this article mostly looks fine, but some parts, IMHO, are may be nitpicking. Other than that, this article looks similar to other articles, e.g
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Yeah, it's very poor, and still reads like an infomercial. I noted on the talkpage that it seems to be the last section left that needs major work. —
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DualShock controller", "standard 8MB card, priced ¥3,660", "came in 120mL bottles with a retail price of ¥19". I could go on, but you get the idea. --
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No comments? So if we go to FAC, we won't be swamped with "refer to peer review", correct? Or, if we are, I can consider that a silent support? :-) —
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a spoiler or limited to a plot summary. All in all, the format matches up pretty well with the other Final Fantasy articles. —
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The merchandise section has a lot of unnecessary information... "model: SCPH-75000 FF", "a
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Knowledge (XXG):Peer review
Final Fantasy XII
Final Fantasy XII
Deckill
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04:40, 22 March 2007 (UTC)
Deckill
er
05:11, 24 March 2007 (UTC)
Teggles
09:53, 24 March 2007 (UTC)
Deckill
er
14:52, 24 March 2007 (UTC)
Final Fantasy VII
Final Fantasy VIII
Final Fantasy X
Final Fantasy X-2
Chrono Cross
Chrono Trigger
Sjones23
16:40, 25 March 2007 (UTC)
Shouri Shokkou
23:27, 10 April 2007 (UTC)

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