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I've listed this article for peer review because I would like to make it a GA. Now I know the Reception isn't finished, the attendance, and the times are not done. Pro wrestling history still has not placed up the results. I just want to fix all the small stuff before the DVD is released in October.
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starts being hyped. So I want to know if the references are fine, if everything is sourced that needs to be sourced, if it reads well, really just everything that is needed for GA standards. Thanks,
350: 103: 70: 66: 158:"The first was between Team 3D (Brother Ray and Brother Devon), and Christian Cage and Rhino in a New Jersey Street", has a lot of "and" repetitions. 51: 251:
Well I feel it is worth noting since TNA aired special footage between Sting and Nash later on Impact that week after Sting's attack on AJ.
43: 355: 174:"This was followed by Sting hitting Joe in the back and the gut with a baseball bat", I don't think the mention of "gut" is important. 324: 275: 200:"Most of the match was dominated by Beer Money, Inc as they weakened the injured Homicide", how did they weaken Homicide? 331: 303: 282: 134: 296: 127: 59: 17: 95: 168:
The use of the brackets are only for tag teams and the use for it in Sharmell's name needs to be fixed.
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Angle and AJ Styles feud; "When the darkness was lifted", sounds off, may need to be reworded.
99: 310: 261: 248:"While Kevin Nash asked him why he just attacked Styles", is it important to include? 344: 243:"who has widely known to have broken his neck multiple times in the past" ---: --> 218:"until Abyss (Chris Parks) came to Cage's and Rhino's rescue", "rescue" ---: --> 209:"When Rhino and Ray impacted with the table it did not break", "impacted"? 115:
I'm just trying to get stuff I have on the ppv list finished before
244:"who has been widely known to conjure multiple neck injuries". 225:
Main event matches: Angle and AJ Styles, damn that's long.;)
234:"Angle went to perform some type of suplex", "some type"? 98:
review of the article for issues relating to grammar and
85: 78: 47: 192:"The match was mainly fast paced", sounds like POV. 229:"The referee then began his count", "his" ---: --> 351:Peer review pages with semiautomated peer reviews 8: 111:This peer review discussion has been closed. 195:I just removed it. It doesn't really help. 94:A script has been used to generate a semi- 288:Okay, thanks. How does it look now?-- 7: 24: 140:Resolved comments from ThinkBlue 332:21:26, 24 September 2008 (UTC) 304:07:20, 21 September 2008 (UTC) 283:17:41, 19 September 2008 (UTC) 135:05:14, 16 September 2008 (UTC) 102:style; it can be found on the 1: 18:Knowledge (XXG):Peer review 372: 104:automated peer review page 356:October 2008 peer reviews 259:Here are my comments. -- 157:This sentence ----: --> 203:How does it sound now? 173:This sentence ---: --> 188:Preliminary matches: 148:ThinkBlue's comments 106:for September 2008. 28:Hard Justice (2008) 181:What do you think? 117:Bound for Glory IV 86:Watch peer review 363: 330: 322: 317: 314: 301: 294: 281: 273: 268: 265: 132: 125: 83: 74: 55: 371: 370: 366: 365: 364: 362: 361: 360: 341: 340: 339: 338: 323: 318: 312: 309: 297: 290: 274: 269: 263: 260: 141: 128: 121: 89: 64: 41: 35: 31: 22: 21: 20: 12: 11: 5: 369: 367: 359: 358: 353: 343: 342: 337: 336: 335: 334: 308:Looks good. -- 257: 256: 255: 254: 253: 252: 246: 240: 239: 238: 237:How about now? 232: 223: 222: 221: 215: 214: 213: 206: 205: 204: 198: 197: 196: 186: 185: 184: 183: 182: 176: 170: 162: 161: 160: 150: 149: 142: 139: 138: 113: 108: 107: 91: 90: 88: 34: 30: 25: 23: 15: 14: 13: 10: 9: 6: 4: 3: 2: 368: 357: 354: 352: 349: 348: 346: 333: 329: 327: 321: 316: 315: 307: 306: 305: 302: 300: 295: 293: 287: 286: 285: 284: 280: 278: 272: 267: 266: 250: 249: 247: 245: 241: 236: 235: 233: 231: 227: 226: 224: 220: 216: 211: 210: 207: 202: 201: 199: 194: 193: 191:This ---: --> 190: 189: 187: 180: 179: 177: 175: 171: 169: 166: 165: 163: 159: 155: 154: 152: 151: 147: 146: 145: 137: 136: 133: 131: 126: 124: 118: 112: 105: 101: 97: 93: 92: 87: 82: 81: 77: 72: 68: 63: 62: 58: 53: 49: 45: 40: 39: 33: 32: 29: 26: 19: 325: 311: 298: 291: 276: 262: 258: 242: 228: 217: 208:Hmm ---: --> 172: 167: 164:Background: 156: 143: 129: 122: 110: 109: 79: 75: 61:Article talk 60: 56: 37: 27: 212:Any better? 48:visual edit 345:Categories 313:ThinkBlue 264:ThinkBlue 96:automated 71:history 52:history 38:Article 230:"the". 219:"aid". 153:Lead: 144:Lead 100:house 80:Watch 16:< 326:BLUE 320:(Hit 292:Will 277:BLUE 271:(Hit 123:Will 67:edit 44:edit 347:: 84:• 69:| 50:| 46:| 328:) 299:C 279:) 130:C 76:· 73:) 65:( 57:· 54:) 42:(

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