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for WrestleMania and then four for Backlash because WrestleMania is a widely known ppv and the most major ppv in wrestling. It is a double standard. To me the matches are important and I would like to keep them in there and if they are called for by a majority after I plead my case at FAC then I'll remove them. The article is 44 kilobytes long and I can get it to at least 41 without removing feuds. Plus just because it has bothered me. We are talking about two companies. Vince McMahon looks at the Divas as eye candy. TNA's division is different. They aren't the same way with their division. Hardcore matches are a regular in their division. Also to give evidence that WWE's division is different, they had a chance to sign the best woman wrestler in the US. Cheerleader Melissa. They didn't. TNA pushes their division to main event impacts and such. That is why the match is a little more important. It is how the match was showcased. To you the matches are minor. To me they had build. So they are important in my mind to at least be mentioned in the background.--

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read by Thinkblue and she said it was well written and made sense. I just do not know why you find all these problems. Saying they were allowed to add two new members. That was never the case. There was no announcement. It was just Morgan saying Storm was added to Team Tomko. No standing in a ring or backstage saying the team can add two more members. Team Cage was never said to be allowed another member. They just said Morgan was on their team. I'm trying to write it the best way I can and go by what happened. I'm home schooled. I never really had to write papers. I just had to take about 80 test a year in each subject.

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brawling again when Sting appeared in the ring with a baseball bat. Afterwards, a match was made for later that night, in which Sting, Cage, Rhino, and Nash defeated Styles, Tomko, and Team 3D. After the match, Storm, in storyline, hit Sting in the back of the head with a beer bottle. On the April 3 episode of Impact!, Cornette's storyline replacement for the night, Matt Morgan, allowed Team Tomko to add a fifth member to its team, which ended up being Storm; Cage added Morgan later in the program to even the odds.

1783:- 1)I think there is a repetitive of "later." So I recommend replacing "later in the show" with "during the show." Also, "of Impact!" should go after "later episode" because you are talking about a future event and it seems correct to have that there. I also find the words "forever" unnecessary, quitting is enough to tell that he will not return ever.-- 4310:

attempted to climb out of the cage, while Dutt grabbed a planted knife from underneath the ring and gave it to Lethal to cut the tape. After Lethal was freed, he jumped through the open door, which was held open by his on-screen girlfriend, SoCal Val (Valerie Wyndham) and Dutt, to win the match. By doing so, he retained the TNA X Division Championship.

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there is one, and two important undercard matches. The rest are not major and the event section can just cover that no need for it's buildup. WWE Women's Championship matches are not major, unless it was featured as a major match such as the secondary main event or the final undercard match. This is about the event, remember not the feuds themselves.

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written in but there are eight matches they will wonder what about the other matches. You are leaving out important information see. They had build to them. The company spent time and money to place those matches on the card and to build to them enough that they mean something. If the company worked on them then it makes them important.--

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I'm rushing it mainly because in this next week I have alot to do. Around Sunday I have to start the long hall for my school work. I have to be at alot of things for my church next week and plus Monday I have to write the event for BFG IV. I also plan on having all the TNA ppv articles I'm working on

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Well the main reason they are long is I feel if I don't explain what the other matches meant then I'm leaving out important information. Like the other matches were filler when they weren't. They each got time and considerable build to each one that are explained in the background. I tried to mention

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Another main match on the card was the annual X Division Xscape match, which was for the TNA X Division Championship. Jay Lethal (Jamar Shipman) defended the championship against Consequences Creed (Austin Watson), Johnny Devine (John Parsonage), Shark Boy (Dean Roll), Curry Man (Daniel Covell), and

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Like I said earlier, people most of the time don't want to help out a lot on PR, but at FAC they will hunt down problems like crazy. I know about this, it has happened before. Just because a few people have reviewed it doesn't matter, the other reason I'm finding all these problems because you wrote

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On March (whatever date it is) during an episode of Impact!, Cage announced Sting, who was on a hiatus from company since November 2007, as his final partner. Later that night, both teams were allowed to add one more member to their team, as Storm was added to Tomko's team, while Morgan was added to

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After the match, Storm, in storyline, hit Sting in the back of the head with a beer bottle. On the April 3 episode of Impact!, Cornette's storyline replacement for the night, Matt Morgan, allowed Team Tomko to add a fifth member to its team, which ended up being Storm. Team Cage then added Morgan to

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The rest of the section gave me a bit of a headache; as indicated, I think the section is overlong and overdetailed. One thing I did notice towards the end is the reference to someone's "dad". This is an encyclopedia article, not an informal report, and the introduction of colloquial terms gives the

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During the final moments of the match, Devine taped Lethal's hands to the cage to prevent him from escaping, but as Devine tried to escape through the cage door, Dutt prevented him from doing so. Eventually, Lethal freed himself and jumped through the cage door to win the match and retain his TNA X

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With Devine and Lethal as the only two participants left, each man tried to escape from the cage. When Lethal began to escape, Devine held him back. Devine tied Lethal to the top rope with tape before trying to escape from the cage. He was stopped by Dutt, who was holding the cage door shut. Devine

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Another main match on the card was the annual X Division Xscape match, in which TNA X Division champion Jay Lethal (Jamar Shipman) defended the title against Consequences Creed (Austin Watson), Johnny Devine (John Parsonage), Shark Boy (Dean Roll), Curry Man (Daniel Covell), and Sonjay Dutt (Retesh

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This is different. Take it from someone who watched the impacts before and after this event. Who has watched the event at least 6 or 7 times all the way through. Those two matches are important and it makes no sense to only include four matches out of a eight match card. No sense to write 6 matches

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I must have forgot. TNA actually pushed each one of these feuds for a good while. They started the BG/Kip stuff back in December when BG won the Feast or Fired Briefcase. Gail Kim, ODB, and Kong have been having their feud since Final Resolution. Cage vs Tomko started at Against All Odds. Joe/Angle

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There's a bracket mix-up in the first sentence of the 3rd paragraph. Unsurprising - these multi-bracketed lists are the curse of wrestling articles. This is what you have: "(Tomko , A.J. Styles , Team 3D, and Brother Devon ] and James Black])". Apart from the bracket confusion, why the two "ands"

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Well remember every match took place insides a steel cage on this PPV. And I'm not saying just because it is number three to Slammiversary and Bound for Glory it should be long. But in the xscape match you had eliminations, then in cuffed in the cage you had 11 eliminations, then in Lethal Lockdown

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I just do. I feel ever since the first peer review when you said it would never make GA it upset me and now you are finding all these problems again when not even FA reviews found this many. Crap the thing has been reviewed by Nici, Nikki, two non WP:PW members, and two FA reviewers. The thing was

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First thing I noticed is that the background and event sections are much bigger than the recently passed wrestling FAs. I urge you to reconsider this. In my time at FAC, I've noticed that wrestling articles struggle to attract reviewers who aren't wrestling fans. I fear that a longer article might

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When Cage announced his partners, they were Rhino and Nash, still leaving one spot left open. On the March 20 episode of Impact!, while Team Cage were in a staged brawl with Team Tomko, a promo was shown on the TitanTron, advertising Sting's scripted return to in-ring competition after he had not

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To you, see I'm not a fan of TNA and I peer review articles as a non-wrestling reader. You may think that they are major because you are a fan of TNA and you know about it and you want it your way, but listen, those are not major. Major matches is the main event itself, a secondary main event, if

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Not having those extra two feuds in there is not making a accurate depiction of the event. You are placing in your own thoughts that those two matches meant nothing and leaving out important information. When a non wrestling fan reads the article and sees that only four matches have the storyline

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I tried my best with the event section. I see somethings I can remove but I feel that are notable enough to keep. But I removed 880 bytes from the event section. It looks smaller but now all the matches say is what match was next, who was eliminated and who entered. Just simple things really. The

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On the March 20 episode of Impact!, while Team Cage were in a staged brawl with Team Tomko, a promo was shown on the TitanTron, advertising Sting's scripted return to in-ring competition after he had not been seen on television in the company since November of 2007. The next week, the teams were

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It was this thing TNA did in December where they had a battle royal where you had to enter the ring, grab one of the briefcases in the fours corners, and get eliminated with the case. It was stupid. One had a World title show, another had a X division title shot, and a tag title shot, while the

1617:. Also, what is "Impact!"? Should explain that it is TNA's only TV show. Also, no need for "an on screen authority figured" just "a portrayed match maker and rules enforcer" will suffice. See, if you take my advice above, it will be more clearer as to who the champion is and what the "belt" is. 1399:

Eight professional wrestling matches were featured on the event's card. These matches were planned with predetermined outcomes by TNA's creative staff and featured wrestlers playing a character for the entertainment of the audience. The buildup to these matches and the scenarios that took place

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Still with the Background section, I had some difficulty with the chronological sequemce. For example, "Their scripted rivalry began when Tomko turned on Cage..." Clarify when this happened. Also, "Tomko later announced..." When, exactly? And: "His teammates were..." His teammates for what? And

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General: the section is overlong, with in my view far too much detail - I just couldn't keep up. My understanding of the function of the section is that it should should prepare us for the main event story by introducing the main characters and outlining the feuds which are being scripted. It

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I've listed this article for peer review because I wish to make it an FA. I need to get all the small things fixed. It is a little long but if you notice what type of matches took place and that it is TNA's third main ppv it is near impossible to get it smaller than it is. All the sources are

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This will take a long time, possibly a month if it keeps in the pace, I would recommend following the suggestions and changes you made above to the matches and apply it to the rest of the matches and trim them down as much as you can. I will check it again once you are done because of time

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During the match, two notable things occurred, one being Saeed helping Kong win the championship by distracting Kim and the other being Kim sustaining a storyline injury, which did not allow her to challenge Kong for the championship at the next up coming TNA pay-per-view Against All

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Well would like me to just name who the first was and who the last was? Then in the middle say the order of eliminations went as follows: example, example, etc: or something like that. Well the match was a arm-up but the event is the company's third major ppv. It goes

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As I get to the end of the section, I must agree with SRX. It is long for my tastes. I think it would be better to keep the focus on the main event matches, and maybe one undercard match. If you want to summarize the remaining feuds in a paragraph, that would be fine

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Still needs some work, in my view. The most important advice I can give you is to refer to the structure of the most recent wrestling FAs. If something sets a new standard, that is what all subsequent articles in a particular category must shoot for. Best of luck.

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This was followed by Curry Man performing a front flip from the top of the cage and driving his back into Creed's chest in a move known as a senton, and then a inverted fireman's carry facebuster, a move also known as the Spice Rack, to gain the three count on

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Can't I just explain them in the event. There are alot of rules to them and saying what I said in the lead just wouldn't fit in the background in my mind. You can check the explaination in the event if you want. I feel that would be the better place to explain

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Well in a way they are major. The encounter of former tag team partners of a historic tag team. The former knockouts champion and former number one contender against the knockouts champion and her manager. That seems major to me. Just not as major as the other

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you had entrances. I gave you a link to the ppv, I found it on Dailymontin the other day. If you have time watch it. It is a pretty good ppv, you can see alot of things happened that are notable and I tried my best to only mention the more notable things.--

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Problematic sources: prowrestlinghistory.com, wrestlingobserver.com (I don't believe the FAC source-checkers regard Meltzer as a reliable source), 411mania.com (the author isn't football's Larry Csonka, right? Just curious.), and prowrestling.about.com.

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Actually his promo is important. We are talking about someone who had not been in TNA since November on 07. Who returned on the companies first live impact, which people told me to remove. Anyway I have worked on the feud a little bit. How does it look

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You still need to remove the references. Also, sigh, I thought you were going to remove the non important feuds in the background, it is too long. The four most hyped matches should only be added, and knowing TNA they would most likely only hype max

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The beginning was dominated by Lethal and Dutt, as they worked together to try to eliminate all of the other competitors. Dutt, however, was eliminated first in the match, as Devine rolled him over on his back for the three count, a move known as a

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The participants were Roxxi Laveaux (Nicole Raczynski), Angelina Love (Angel Williams), Velvet Sky (Jamie Szantyr), Salinas (Shelly Martinez), Rhaka Khan (Trenesha Biggers), Traci Brooks (Tracy Brookshaw), Christy Hemme, and Jacqueline (Jacqueline

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Sorry I'm not really paying attention. I'm home schooled so I'm never really out of school. I'm trying to get done months in advance so I can go back in December. I was trying to read my history book while fixing these. I do that alot. Sorry about

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Some prose checks. This is from background: "These matches were planned with predetermined outcomes by TNA's creative staff and feature wrestlers playing a character for the entertainment of the audience." The correct tense for this is "featured".

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Curry Man began a fight with Lethal, during which he performed the Spice Rack and attempted a pinfall, but it was broken up by Devine. Devine performed a double underhook piledriver on Curry Man. He then pinned Curry Man to eliminate him from the

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Maybe you could be more clear. I'm not sure exactly where you want me to put that. After he was unhappy or something. Maybe finish the sentence would help a little. An outside is mainly a WWE guy or someone from another promotion that is already

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Their scripted rivalry began when Tomko betrayed Cage, who was befriending him at the time, at the company's February pay-per-view Against All Odds in Cage's World Heavyweight Championship match against Kurt Angle by helping Angle retain the

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reliable to my knowledge. They are PWTorch, Slam, Wrestling Observer, and WrestleView. I would like the references checked, if it is well written, if everything makes sense, and if anything can be taken out (besides background for matches).

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One minute they were saying quitting TNA and then he said quitting pro wrestling on a later edition. I had it in a whole another sentence saying his announcement but I was told it wasn't that important to say when it happen, just that it

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WHAT? Sorry but that is the exact same sentence I placed in there you told me to place. You also said just mention Six Sides of Steel after I mention it once. I have that is why I removed the cage part. I placed the cage back in there.

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I can't just go Storm and Morgan were added later. Do you want me to say this: Team Cage vs Team Tomko was the second top storyline. Cage and Tomko were captains. Their team members were added later over weeks. A steel cage involiving

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This enraged O.D.B. and Kim, as Saeed repeatedly cost them their chances at the championship. Because of this, a tag team match was later announced by TNA for Lockdown pitting the team of Kim and O.D.B. against the team of Kong and

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Before they were scripted into a feud, Tomko and Cage were alliances. The feud began at Against All Odds, TNA's (whatever PPV), during Cage's TNA World Heavyweight title match, when Tomko betrayed Cage to help Kurt Angle retain the

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seemingly started out well enough, but became increasingly confusing - all these fight details left my head spinning. So please try to shorten and simplify the section. In addition, there ae some specific points needing attention.

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The finish saw Love trying to pin Laveaux by rolling her over on her back and sitting on Laveaux's legs in a pinning attempt called a Victory Roll, Laveaux kicked out of the pin attempt and slammed Love into the wall of the steel

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done. I'm just trying to speed it up so I can focus on other stuff. I'm not trying to rush you, I'm just trying to figure out how I can close this before a week. I know how to close the review, but can I close it before a week?--

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On the April 3 episode of Impact!, Cornette's storyline replacement for the night, Matt Morgan, allowed Team Tomko to add a fifth member to its team, which ended up being Storm; Cage added Morgan later in the program to even the

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Their scripted rivalry began when Tomko betrayed Cage, who was befriending him at the time, at the company's February pay-per-view in Cage's TNA World Heavyweight Championship match against Kurt Angle by helping Angle retain the

3428:- remove "two notable things occurred" that's really distracting. Also, I think it would be best to list the name of the pay-per-view earlier so you can just say Against All Odds versus "TNA's (next) pay-per-view Destination X" 844:

The other bout was a standard wrestling elimination match involving six wrestlers, also known as an Xscape match. TNA X Division Champion Jay Lethal defeated Consequences Creed, Johnny Devine, Shark Boy, Curry Man, and Sonjay

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Event, Preliminary matches: This whole section has the feel of older wrestling FACs. The ones that have passed recently have fewer details about the matches. Reviewers will most likely be expecting that out of new candidates.

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So whaT? During the Elimination Chamber of SS'03, Goldberg speared Jericho through one of the pods, an OMG move, I didn't add it because it's too much plot, especially in these types of matches, where you should only say the

4283:- Eliminate everything up to Devine performed a double underhook piledriver. Just get to the eliminations, like in SummerSlam (2003) for the Elimination Chamber. Also, underhook piledriver is jargon, you need to explain it. 3490:

Okay. I don't see nothing wrong with championship here. There is no Triple Threat match on the card. No reason to really say that. Plus WWE has Triple Threat's, TNA has 3 way matches and 3 way dances. Just throwing that out

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Okay. How is it too much play by play. Crap I only explained the main points. Who was eliminated, by who, when the next entrance was, and things to me that are notable. Like TNA setting the main event up to look like a MMA

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Sigh, you are not getting my point. But at FAC, the FA reviewers will bring the topic up. I also say this because most of the feuds don't go in depth, like a major hyped match would. But you want them so..I will review it

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One of the featured matches on the undercard was an intergender tag team match between the team of Booker T (Robert Huffman) and Sharmell (Sharmell Sullivan-Huffman), and the team of Robert Roode and Payton Banks (Bonnie

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Also on the March 13 episode of Impact!, Tomko choose Styles to be a one of his team members, he choose Team 3D on the March 20 episode of Impact!, which completed his team, since each captain was to have a team of four

2481:- same episode of what? Remember you jumped to the PPV. Should explain that Tomko chose his first teammates, who were Style and Team 3D, in it's current format it sounds like Styles and Team 3D are all of his teammates. 1644:- 1)You have to avoid using parenthesis when commas should be in place, thus that statement needs to be in commas (yes it looks weird, but it's proper grammar). 2)Replace "main" with "primary" more encyclopedic word.-- 650:

The "Queen of the Cage" paragraph has two extended linked phrases. If these are descriptions of acknowledged wrestling moves, name the move and link on that. At the moment I’ve no idea what the phrases are linking to.

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What it now says in "...advertising Sting's scripted return to in ring competition". Should this be "in-ring" (with hyphen)? Still no indication of what he was returning from. An earlier retirement? An injury? etc etc

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Don't have all capital letters in the references, even if that's how it's presented. If they are that way, just have the first letter of each word capitalized. I don't know why authors would have all caps in any case.

818:- same thing here, in addition discourage using "standard wrestling match in the lead and tables (the exceptions). In the lead you can be in-universe, but in the sections you have to break it down and explain things. 3487:- 1)Keep in mind the repetition of "Championship" 2)Say Triple-Threat match and then say that it is a standard match involving three competitors so that way in the event section you can just say Triple-Threat match. 4252:

Well we are writing in summary style, lets at least talk a little bit more about the match. We don't have to just go A vs B, A won the world title. Lets put a little bit more flavor. Just a little it will not kill

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The match began with Lethal and Dutt working together towards eliminating the other competitors, though, Dutt was eliminated by Devine after he was rolled on his back for the pinfall, in a move known as a roll-up.

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Later in the show, Joe was scripted to make an announcement in which if he did not win at Lockdown, he would quit TNA forever. This statement was later changed to quitting professional wrestling forever on a later

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Okay, I haven't read that in so long and I just went and got something to eat. Well the article has went under a copyedit. It is all read for comments. I have a way if you want me to cut the Lethal Lockdown match

1065:- at FAC, they will ask you to convert the measurements of the cage so it's best to leave it here as six sides of steel and in the bg explain that it is part of the production (every match being one of those).-- 2007:

On the March 13 episode of Impact!, TNA's primary television program), Management Director Jim Cornette, a portrayed match maker and rules enforcer, announced that Angle would defend the belt against Joe at

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Laveaux then picked and dropped Love in a seated position to execute The Voodoo Drop (should be in italics). She then pinned Love to earn the opportunity to challenge for the TNA Women's Title (or w/e it's

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I was told earlier in this peer review by one of the FA reviewers that the first line of the event should have the name of the event. Why should I say who defended the title when it was already mentioned?--

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That night, Angle successfully defended his championship against Kaz (Frank Gerdelman) on Impact! and then announced that he would defeat Joe at Lockdown to prove that he was the best wrestler in the world.

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I'm not sure what to say. Just the The Great American Bash and SummerSlam were pasted with those sources. Larry Csonka I have no idea who he is. I just know he works for 411Mania and Wrestling Observer.com.

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After Kim returned following Against All Odds, TNA announced that at Destination X, Kim, O.D.B., and Kong would be involved in a match involving three competitors for the TNA Women's Knockout Championship.

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Yes this is taking a long time. I'll do a copyedit really quick and have it ready by tomorrow. I would like to speed this up aswell so I can have this up for FAC by the end of the week or sometime really

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Also, Sting's promo is still not important, just remove the promo part and in a later sentence add that he returned to the company after not being seen since November 2007, you'll see what I mean later.--

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On the March 13 episode of Impact! (TNA's main television program), Management Director Jim Cornette, a portrayed match maker and rules enforcer, announced that Angle would defend the belt against Joe at

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On the March 13 edition of Impact!, Management Director Jim Cornette, an on-screen authority figure portrayed as a match maker and rule enforcer, announced that Angle would defend the belt against Joe at

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See you are judging these based on length they have been occurring, wrong. That does not make them notable, the main event matches should be the only ones hyped as the article should only include notable

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was one of WWE's main ppv's and featured a caged match up and is way shorter. Another thing is, there is nothing wrong with writing every feud, but most feuds don't have buildup and shouldn't be added.--

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Later in the show, Joe made a storyline announcement that if he did not win the title at Lockdown, he would quit TNA forever; his statement was later changed to quitting professional wrestling forever.

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The main event at Lockdown featured a Six Sides of Steel cage match between Kurt Angle and Samoa Joe (Joe Seanoa), with the two having a storyline rivalry over the TNA World Heavyweight Championship.

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Well, like I said, these multi-bracketed lists are a curse and make the article impossible to read. Why not try a different approach, e.g: "The other main rivalry heading into Lockdown was between

2427:- not best of wording, just avoid saying the name of the PPV, just say " the company's previous pay-per-view." Also, the WHC is TNA's so it should contain the acronym, like the WWE Championship. -- 233:

You may wind up with a problem having two fair-use images when this becomes a candidate. Keeping in mind there are plenty of pictures, consider losing the DVD image and just going with the poster.

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The third bout was a Six Sides of Steel match between B.G. James and Kip James, which ended when Kip attempted to knock B.G. backwards against the turnbuckle with a move known as a Stinger Splash.

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Kip, wanting B.G. to choose him to be his partner when he challenged the World Tag Team Champions, eagerly begged him to announce who his partner would be when he challenged for the championship.

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Kip, wanting B.G. to choose him to be his partner when he challenged the World Tag Team Champions eagerly begged him to announce who his partner would be when he challenged for the championship.

3722:- how about "Saeed repeatedly interfered in their championship matches. This resulted in a tag team match advertised for Lockdown in which the team of Kim and O.D.B. would face Kong and Saeed." 2403:

They weren't really alliances. Tomko was in an alliance with Angle but said he was on his own at the time. He did not want to any help. He was just helping Cage every little bit as a friend.--

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During the match, Kip attempted a move known as a Stinger Splash, in which he ran and jumped towards the turnbuckle attempting to crash into B.G., however, B.G. jumped out of the way.

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hasn't really quit since Genesis 06. Booker T/Roode started in November. They all had a very good amount of build to them. Each had more build than Punk/Batista or Triple H vs Edge.--

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I just explained the feud real quick. I think people still know it was the March 13 but I'll clear it up. There was only supposed to be four people on a team. It was changed latter.

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The match began with Lethal and Dutt working together towards eliminating the other competitors, though, Dutt was eliminated by Devine after he was rolled on his back for a pinfall.

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Their scripted rivalry began when Tomko betrayed Cage at Against All Odds in Cage's World Heavyweight Championship match against Kurt Angle by helping Angle retain the championship.

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On the same episodes, March 13 and March 20, Cage announced two of his three partners, one was Rhino (March 13) and the other was Nash (March 20), still leaving one spot left open.

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After their match at Destination X, Sharmell made her return and hit everyone around the ring, including Roode, Banks, Jim Cornette, and the security workers with a leather strap.

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With Love dazed, Laveaux pinned her after picking her up and placing her arm behind Love's head and falling to a seated position, in a move Laveaux named "The Voodoo Drop".

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The main event at Lockdown featured TNA World Heavyweight Champion (whoever is the champion) defending the title against (the contender) in a Six Sides of Steel cage match.

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this article when we had the old basic OOU format, but now we have a newer one that works better. One comment about the event before I get there, too much play-by-play.--

2558:- this can all be merged to avoid these wordy sentences, just get to the point on who Cage announced as his partners. Forget about Sting's promo, irrelevant to the feud. 258:"made his debut in the promotion at their November pay-per-view, Genesis in 2007." Last part of this is quite awkward. Try November 2007 event; I think that would work. 110: 34: 4788:

Okay, I'm finished with the Event, Aftermath, and Reception. Hopefully we can finished today. Also is there anyway I can get this peer review closed before Saturday?--

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Another storyline rivalry heading into Lockdown was the encounter between former Voodoo Kin Mafia partners B.G. James (Brian Gerard James) and Kip James (Monty Sopp).

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It doesn't seem right since background is the base for the event, it doesn't matter if the explanation is long it's okay, the explanation in the event clutters it.--

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On the March 13 and 20 episodes of Impact!, Tomko chose Styles and Team 3D, respectively, as his team members, which completed the three spots remaining on his team.

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As a result, O.D.B. stepped in to challenge Kong for the title. O.D.B. failed in her attempted to win the championship after interference from Kong's manager Saeed.

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As per tradition of Lockdown events, every match was contested inside a 16 feet (4.9 m) high metal steel structure with six sides, also known as Six Sides of Steel.

1474:- I hope you see your error here. Also, in later paragraphs you say "Six Sides of Steel cage match" and here you just call it "Six Sides of Steel," be consistent.-- 2669:- see at the SummerSlam FAC, I was told to avoid lengthy explanations like this, get to the point Will, just say that Morgan and Storm were added to each team.-- 4223:

I feel the senton should be mentioned as well. This was a flip from the top of a 16 foot high steel cage. He could have been killed. I feel it is note worthy.

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This staged rivalry slowly began to arise in early December, when B.G. won the Feast or Fired World Tag Team Title shot at TNA's December pay-per-view in 2007.

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Kong prevailed at Destination X, pinning O.D.B. after Saeed grabbed O.D.B.'s leg from the outside the ring, which allowed Kong to perform a sit down powerbomb.

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The main event at Lockdown featured TNA World Heavyweight Champion Kurt Angle defending the title against Samoa Joe (Joe Seanoa) in a Six Sides of Steel match.

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As per tradition of Lockdown events, every match was contested inside a 16 feet (4.9 m) high steel structure with six sides, also known as Six Sides of Steel.

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Before I fully comment I just want to point something out you said. You state that because its TNA's third main PPV, it needs big length. I sort of disagree,

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The reigning champion, Jay Lethal defeated Consequences Creed, Johnny Devine, Shark Boy, Curry Man, and Sonjay Dutt in the match to retain the championship.

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General comment: You shouldn't list the name of the move if you are not going to use it again in the section, you should just list how it is executed.--

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On the March 20 episode of Impact!, Cornette placed Booker T and Sharmell in a match at Lockdown against Roode and Banks to end their scripted rivalry.

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As per tradition of Lockdown events, every match was contested inside a sixteen foot high steel cage with six sides, also known as Six Sides of Steel.

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As per tradition of Lockdown events, every match was contested inside a sixteen foot high steel cage with six sides, also known as Six Sides of Steel.

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Well the whole feud is about Saeed costing them the title, I believe adding in Saeed cost them their chances is useful. I've worked on it a little.--

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Wrong, the lead should not be treated as a section. Plus, the match should be explained the first time it appears to avoid it in the event section.--

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I think the extended description of the multiple cuffing is unnecessary and could be much reduced, especially as this is apparently a warm-up event.

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been seen on television in the company since 2007. The next week, the teams were brawling again when Sting appeared in the ring with a baseball bat.

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None taken. I wasn't really trying anyway. I'm trying to do 80 things at once at the house at the moment so my mind isn't really paying attention.--

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Then say instead "Saeed constantly interfere in championship matches and prevented (whoever) from winning", something like that short and simple.--

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Anybetter? You said it can be in universe in the lead. Well the matches are explained in the background and event sections. I guess that will do.--

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First sentence should include the event name, not just "pay per view", e.g "...was the first match of Lockdown (2008) to air live on pay per view".

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Note:My changes are from my experience and will not be perfect and may contain grammatical errors, which at FAC will be noticed, just as at the

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Why do you take all my comments literally? Listen, you say too much and go to much in depth with the feuds, when you can say it in less words.

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Mainly because it is told in better detail in the event section. Plus it is linked in he lead which is too close to this, no need in my mind.--

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O.D.B challenged Kong for the title, however, she was unable to win the title in a match against Kong on (whenever and wherever it occurred).

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In the storyline, Roode was unhappy that outsiders were coming to TNA and taking away his chances at becoming a main star in the promotion.

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I'll take your advice just do not contradict yourself. You are the one in the first place that said it should be edition and not episode.--

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In this match, the participants fight to climb up the cage and into the ring. The first two to do so then have a standard wrestling match.

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Okay, I did a little copyediting to the background. Hopefully it is a little better. Not sure what needed to be removed and what didn't.--

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The finish saw Love roll Laveaux onto her back in a pin attempt, but Laveaux countered and threw Love into one of the steel cage's walls.

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Well that's not correct because it's confusing trying to see who is in the match by scrolling to the BG section, similar as other FACs.--

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to convert sixteen feet into meters as well. Also, not a good explanation of a steel cage, try to use the words "metal" and "structure"

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I'm not sure what you want me to do with the World Heavyweight Champion part. Plus it was their previous ppv. That was Destination X.--

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So much less and still says the same thing. Yes it looks dull, boring, and misses the juicy details, but you have to avoid that per

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I can link it but I shouldn't explain it here. As much stuff that is in the rules it would just make it wordy here. I'll link it.--

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B.G. jumped out of the way. After Kip bounced off the top turnbuckle, B.G. pulled Kip down into a roll-up to gain the three count.

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The other main match on the undercard was the annual X Division Xscape match, which was for the TNA X Division Championship.

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But another thing, I don't even understand how he tried to knock him backwards against the TB, needs a better explanation.

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The word "turnbuckle" is not common English. Most non-wrestling readers won’t know what it means. Therefore link or explain

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During the match, Kip attempted to run and hit B.G., who was positioned in the ring corner, but B.G. moved out of the way.

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The other main event took place inside a steel cage with a flat roof that was filled with weapons (Lethal Lockdown match);

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Actually it isn't a mistake. I was showing who Team 3D were, Brother Ray and Brother Devon and I placed "]]" on purpose.

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Cornette promoted an intergender tag team match for Lockdown, in which Booker T and Sharmell would face Roode and Banks.

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Later, at Final Resolution, Roode accidentally punched Booker T's wife (Sharmell), and fractured her jaw, in storyline.

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Their staged rivalry began after Booker T made his debut in the promotion at their November pay-per-view event in 2007.

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Later in the same episode, the match was announced, Tomko said his teammates for the match would be Styles and Team 3D.

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That's not what I meant, please revert back to the way it was I said it as an opinion. Plus you begin the section with

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They are, thank you very much! I appreciate you taking the time out of your day to read a give ideas for improvement.--

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Okay, their rivalry is explained by saying it started at Against All Odds. Should I explain what Against All Odds is?--

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shouldn't it be "his teammates would be..."? I'm preparing a few comments on the Event section which I will add later.

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The other main rivalry heading into Lockdown was between Team Cage and Team Tomko in the annual Lethal Lockdown match.

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The other main rivalry heading into Lockdown was between Team Cage and Team Tomko in the annual Lethal Lockdown match.

874:- no need for reigning, the word champion says it all. Also, "in the match"? which match, how about "in this match?"-- 2395:- 1)You need to say somehow that they were alliances before their rivalry. 2)WTF is Against all Odds :)? 3)How about 1953:

Joe did not appear on Impact! for several weeks, as TNA was reporting that he was training for his match at Lockdown.

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Do not rush this process Will, the only way is for you to nominate it for FAC and then you have to close it, see

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As B.G. moved out of the way, Kip hit the corner and B.G. rolled Kip into a roll-up to win the match via pinfall.

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The Xscape match for the TNA X Division Championship was the first match at Lockdown to air live on pay-per-view.

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I'm not sure where they all are. I was going to fix them when we got to them but I fixed the ones I could find.--

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The other bout was a standard wrestling elimination match involving six wrestlers, also known as an Xscape match.

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After their match at Destination X, Sharmell returned and attacked Roode, Banks, Cornette, and security workers.

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On the March 13 episode of Impact!, Cornette announced that Cage and Tomko were the team captains for the match.

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The Queen of the Cage Match for the number one contendership to the TNA Women's Knockout Championship followed.

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During those respective episodes, Cage also announced two of his three team members, which were Rhino and Nash.

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Alot of the move expanations were by GaryColemanfan when he did a copyedit. The stinger splash was by him.--

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This followed with Curry Man (the explanation of the move) to execute a Spice Rack (needs to be in italics).

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Booker T and Roode then competed in two encounters, one at Against All Odds, and the other at Destination X.

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changes. I hope they are a little better. I'm cleaning my room while reading and other stuff so maybe not.--

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How does it look right now because I've really said the samething in there already but wrote differently?--

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This statement was later changed to quitting professional wrestling forever on a later episode of Impact!.

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That is there because Devon was apart of Team 3D and it was better than having parenthesis in parenthesis.

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Joe did not appear on Impact! for several weeks, as he was reportedly training for his match at Lockdown.

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The winners of the Cuffed in the Cage match get a future World Tag Team Championship match. Against whom?

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He hit the turnbuckle and fell backwards when BG grabed him by the legs and pinned him with a roll-up.--

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Okay I look forward to more comments. I hope there aren't many, in a good way. But I'm probably wrong.--

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When the event was released on DVD, it reached a peak position of fifth on Billboard's DVD Sales Chart.

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Each of the challengers fought in qualification matches on Impact! to determine who would participate.

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Later during the program, Angle successfully defended his championship against Kaz (Frank Gerdelman);

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Later during the program, Angle successfully defended his championship against Kaz (Frank Gerdelman);

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for instructions. I recommend waiting for NWO's FAC to finish so there wont be 2 wrestling FAC's up.

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Afterward, Creed slammed Shark Boy's head forward onto the mat and eliminated him by pinfall.

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The event began with TNA X Division Champion (whoever) defending the title against (whoever).

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Another thing, no need to have references in the lead when the statements are in the article.

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Oh that is because I copied the names from the sites instead of writing them. I'll fix that.

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If it did, it would have come up in the previous PPV FAC's. Also, keyword in the criteria,

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Changed. I don't know why all of these are stuff I should have caught. I guess I'm lazy.--

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TNA. Fixed. They did promo videos each week with him in CA training with Marcus Davis.--

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I can get rid of the DVD image. Though that and the poster are the only fair-use images.

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You need to say the people's name and it is more convenient you write it in this way.

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During the match, Kip was scripted to attack B.G. and Armstrong, who were at ringside.

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During the match, Kip attacked B.G., who was at ringside, and Armstrong, in storyline.

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So far I've only read the Background section, so these comments are limited to that.

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I completely forgot. I fixed it yesterday. I just forgot to come here and tell you.--

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Booker T's wife, Sharmell, and as a result was scripted as having a fractured jaw.

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were coming to TNA and preventing him from becoming a main event level wrestler.

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A sentence cannot begin with "Followed by..." Perhaps: "This was followed by..."

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I will try and come back soon with further comments on the rest of the article.

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before, during, and after the event were also planned by TNA's creative staff.

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Sorry I can't give any more time to this but I hope my comments are helpful.

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Later Creed slammed Shark Boy's head forward to the mat to gain the pinfall.

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high metal steel structure with six sides, also known as Six Sides of Steel.

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Joe was scripted to make an announcement in which if he did not win...etc.

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After Kip bounced off the top turnbuckle, B.G. pinned Kip with a roll-up.

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Okay, no more reason to argue with you so if you are going to keep this..

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You can close it any time if you nominate it for FAC, see the prose at

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Changed, but remember dude you chose to place that sentence in there.--

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On the March 13 episode of Impact!, TNA's primary television program)

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only the important stuff as well. Now I'll try to cut the event down.

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The two women to enter the cage were Love and Laveaux, respectively.

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I must not have been paying attention last night. How about now?--

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Also, who changed it to quitting pro wrestling forever? TNA.com?

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Yes, juicy details are gone, but you need to get to the point.--

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I can change them so that they are indepth quickly and easily.--

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Will hit you with more, once these are complete, long way to go.

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In the storyline, Roode was unhappy that wrestlers from other

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Changed, I didn't like that part anyway, it was too wordy.--

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The other main event took place inside Lethal Lockdown match

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Saeed repeatedly interfered in their championship matches.

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In the team match, Devon Hughes has one bracket too many.

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review of the article for issues relating to grammar and

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lifted him and slammed him down to perform a Spice Rack.

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Fixed, and I have told about Against All Odds earlier.--

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Almost, you still have to fix the consistency problem.--

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Not sure what you're meaning but I made a change or two.

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Okay, I wasn't sure. I'm not paying attention again.--

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So you want me to remove the sources from the lead?--

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It is not right to link the whole descriptive phrase

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professional wrestling#Variations of singles matches

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comprehensive: it neglects no major facts or details

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My main concern is the linking in the lead, like in

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Changed to the best of my ability at this moment.--

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I fixed the in-ring and explained in better detail.

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Team Cage consisted of Christian Cage ( 101:A script has been used to generate a semi- 4511:During the match, Kip attempted to...etc. 4312:- can all be said in fewer words. --: --> 427:, while Team Tomko was made up of Tomko ( 1609:- remember, Impact is a TV Show, so use 1402:this needs to be reformatted as seen in 4679:(I hope roll-up is mentioned earlier)-- 4738:constraints in real life on my part.-- 4633:Well some of them aren't to shape IMO. 384:explanation be inserted in the text? 7: 2503:and is better worded, no offense).-- 342:best summery I believe I can make.-- 1577:- hmm, seems confusing. How about 24: 2830:he helped Angle retain his title. 2229:- so you need to be consistent.-- 321:Okay, thanks for the comments.-- 4376:- need to remain in past tense. 2400:Short simple and to the point. 3636:- who is their? be specific.-- 3309:23:01, 30 September 2008 (UTC) 3276:22:29, 30 September 2008 (UTC) 3252:21:04, 30 September 2008 (UTC) 3210:23:55, 29 September 2008 (UTC) 3190:23:35, 29 September 2008 (UTC) 3160:03:35, 29 September 2008 (UTC) 3140:02:17, 29 September 2008 (UTC) 3106:03:35, 29 September 2008 (UTC) 3078:03:35, 29 September 2008 (UTC) 3050:03:35, 29 September 2008 (UTC) 3014:23:55, 29 September 2008 (UTC) 2994:23:35, 29 September 2008 (UTC) 2961:03:35, 29 September 2008 (UTC) 2932:03:35, 29 September 2008 (UTC) 2904:03:35, 29 September 2008 (UTC) 2865:14:06, 28 September 2008 (UTC) 2801:19:53, 28 September 2008 (UTC) 2780:13:56, 28 September 2008 (UTC) 2750:02:16, 28 September 2008 (UTC) 2711:01:45, 28 September 2008 (UTC) 2690:00:25, 28 September 2008 (UTC) 2655:03:40, 28 September 2008 (UTC) 2635:02:16, 28 September 2008 (UTC) 2610:02:16, 28 September 2008 (UTC) 2578:01:45, 28 September 2008 (UTC) 2544:03:40, 28 September 2008 (UTC) 2524:02:16, 28 September 2008 (UTC) 2468:03:40, 28 September 2008 (UTC) 2448:02:16, 28 September 2008 (UTC) 2419:01:45, 28 September 2008 (UTC) 2386:01:45, 28 September 2008 (UTC) 2354:03:40, 28 September 2008 (UTC) 2334:02:16, 28 September 2008 (UTC) 2309:01:45, 28 September 2008 (UTC) 2270:00:08, 28 September 2008 (UTC) 2250:22:44, 27 September 2008 (UTC) 2221:21:48, 27 September 2008 (UTC) 2200:21:10, 27 September 2008 (UTC) 2151:01:14, 27 September 2008 (UTC) 2131:19:04, 26 September 2008 (UTC) 2101:01:14, 27 September 2008 (UTC) 2081:19:04, 26 September 2008 (UTC) 2051:01:14, 27 September 2008 (UTC) 2031:19:04, 26 September 2008 (UTC) 1996:18:43, 26 September 2008 (UTC) 1976:18:14, 26 September 2008 (UTC) 1948:17:56, 26 September 2008 (UTC) 1925:15:28, 26 September 2008 (UTC) 1887:18:43, 26 September 2008 (UTC) 1867:18:14, 26 September 2008 (UTC) 1840:Fixed. I agree with this one. 1824:18:43, 26 September 2008 (UTC) 1804:18:14, 26 September 2008 (UTC) 1775:17:56, 26 September 2008 (UTC) 1734:01:14, 27 September 2008 (UTC) 1713:19:04, 26 September 2008 (UTC) 1685:18:43, 26 September 2008 (UTC) 1665:18:14, 26 September 2008 (UTC) 1636:17:56, 26 September 2008 (UTC) 1599:17:56, 26 September 2008 (UTC) 1560:01:14, 27 September 2008 (UTC) 1540:19:04, 26 September 2008 (UTC) 1515:18:43, 26 September 2008 (UTC) 1495:18:14, 26 September 2008 (UTC) 1463:17:56, 26 September 2008 (UTC) 1425:17:56, 26 September 2008 (UTC) 1375:07:31, 26 September 2008 (UTC) 1353:02:00, 26 September 2008 (UTC) 1323:01:41, 26 September 2008 (UTC) 1300:00:58, 26 September 2008 (UTC) 1274:00:28, 26 September 2008 (UTC) 1253:00:08, 26 September 2008 (UTC) 1216:00:00, 26 September 2008 (UTC) 1195:You are breaking a rule then. 1191:23:52, 25 September 2008 (UTC) 1153:23:40, 25 September 2008 (UTC) 1132:23:33, 25 September 2008 (UTC) 1106:23:21, 25 September 2008 (UTC) 1086:22:56, 25 September 2008 (UTC) 1055:05:04, 25 September 2008 (UTC) 1034:01:11, 25 September 2008 (UTC) 999:23:21, 25 September 2008 (UTC) 974:05:04, 25 September 2008 (UTC) 947:05:04, 25 September 2008 (UTC) 915:23:21, 25 September 2008 (UTC) 895:22:56, 25 September 2008 (UTC) 866:05:04, 25 September 2008 (UTC) 837:05:04, 25 September 2008 (UTC) 805:23:21, 25 September 2008 (UTC) 785:22:56, 25 September 2008 (UTC) 756:05:04, 25 September 2008 (UTC) 711:04:23, 22 September 2008 (UTC) 622:04:23, 22 September 2008 (UTC) 579:06:51, 21 September 2008 (UTC) 559:10:42, 19 September 2008 (UTC) 542:22:14, 18 September 2008 (UTC) 521:20:54, 18 September 2008 (UTC) 504:10:35, 19 September 2008 (UTC) 465:I changed it to what you said. 461:10:35, 19 September 2008 (UTC) 358:03:14, 18 September 2008 (UTC) 337:02:23, 18 September 2008 (UTC) 314:01:13, 18 September 2008 (UTC) 201:01:00, 10 September 2008 (UTC) 176:00:41, 10 September 2008 (UTC) 141:00:26, 10 September 2008 (UTC) 109:style; it can be found on the 1: 2370:On march 13. It is a given.-- 4704:It is in the Xscape match.-- 3391:I just thought to link it.-- 3031:(Link to jaw would be nice) 1470:sixteen foot 16 feet (4.9 m) 4904:18:04, 9 October 2008 (UTC) 4883:17:51, 9 October 2008 (UTC) 4854:17:34, 9 October 2008 (UTC) 4833:17:00, 9 October 2008 (UTC) 4804:16:56, 9 October 2008 (UTC) 4784:02:49, 8 October 2008 (UTC) 4759:01:59, 8 October 2008 (UTC) 4720:20:46, 5 October 2008 (UTC) 4700:20:21, 5 October 2008 (UTC) 4666:20:46, 5 October 2008 (UTC) 4629:20:01, 5 October 2008 (UTC) 4609:19:40, 5 October 2008 (UTC) 4582:20:01, 5 October 2008 (UTC) 4562:19:40, 5 October 2008 (UTC) 4532:20:01, 5 October 2008 (UTC) 4500:20:01, 5 October 2008 (UTC) 4468:20:01, 5 October 2008 (UTC) 4435:20:01, 5 October 2008 (UTC) 4407:20:01, 5 October 2008 (UTC) 4358:03:33, 5 October 2008 (UTC) 4338:02:19, 5 October 2008 (UTC) 4302:03:33, 5 October 2008 (UTC) 4269:17:39, 5 October 2008 (UTC) 4248:15:20, 5 October 2008 (UTC) 4199:03:33, 5 October 2008 (UTC) 4166:17:39, 5 October 2008 (UTC) 4146:15:20, 5 October 2008 (UTC) 4090:15:20, 5 October 2008 (UTC) 4065:03:33, 5 October 2008 (UTC) 4024:16:41, 4 October 2008 (UTC) 4004:16:35, 4 October 2008 (UTC) 3974:16:31, 4 October 2008 (UTC) 3954:16:04, 4 October 2008 (UTC) 3927:16:31, 4 October 2008 (UTC) 3896:16:31, 4 October 2008 (UTC) 3868:16:31, 4 October 2008 (UTC) 3839:16:31, 4 October 2008 (UTC) 3804:14:55, 4 October 2008 (UTC) 3769:01:14, 2 October 2008 (UTC) 3746:00:31, 2 October 2008 (UTC) 3702:15:59, 4 October 2008 (UTC) 3677:15:08, 4 October 2008 (UTC) 3657:14:55, 4 October 2008 (UTC) 3629:05:53, 4 October 2008 (UTC) 3609:02:17, 4 October 2008 (UTC) 3584:01:14, 2 October 2008 (UTC) 3552:05:53, 4 October 2008 (UTC) 3532:02:17, 4 October 2008 (UTC) 3507:01:14, 2 October 2008 (UTC) 3478:01:14, 2 October 2008 (UTC) 3447:01:14, 2 October 2008 (UTC) 3407:01:14, 2 October 2008 (UTC) 3373:01:14, 2 October 2008 (UTC) 3329:21:28, 1 October 2008 (UTC) 2499:(This avoids starting with 18:Knowledge (XXG):Peer review 4952: 4215:an inverted firman's carry 3820:- no need for "storyline" 722:Resolved comments from SRX 274:I'll try to cut that down. 111:automated peer review page 4936:October 2008 peer reviews 3877:- comma after champions. 3880:I must have forgot it.-- 3456:- Stepped in? How about 443:pairing of Brother Ray ( 393:at the end of he list? 4379:Why not combine -: --> 4367:Second and third match 3353:Bhalla) in this match. 603:is not a helpful link 2161:- you almost got it. 726:Sorry for the delay. 587:Some comments on the 447:) and Brother Devon ( 368:Brianboulton comments 4042:- how about saying, 1900:- who reported this? 215:turn off reviewers. 36:Previous peer review 3681:Sorry about that.-- 3418:Comments on Feud #5 3340:Comments on Feud #4 3216:You're doing great! 2876:Comments on Feud #3 113:for September 2008. 4477:- Umm, no. --: --> 3350:-how about saying 2282:Background Feud #2 1447:Fixed, a little.-- 978:That is correct.-- 282:It must be a typo. 4209:- how about just 3781:No Way Out (2004) 3228:- same goes here. 1404:No Way Out (2004) 151:SummerSlam (2003) 93:Watch peer review 4943: 4901: 4894: 4878: 4868: 4851: 4844: 4828: 4818: 4801: 4794: 4781: 4774: 4754: 4744: 4717: 4710: 4695: 4685: 4663: 4656: 4626: 4619: 4604: 4594: 4579: 4572: 4557: 4547: 4529: 4522: 4497: 4490: 4465: 4458: 4432: 4425: 4404: 4397: 4355: 4348: 4333: 4323: 4299: 4292: 4266: 4259: 4243: 4233: 4196: 4189: 4163: 4156: 4141: 4131: 4085: 4075: 4062: 4055: 4021: 4014: 3999: 3989: 3971: 3964: 3949: 3939: 3924: 3917: 3893: 3886: 3865: 3858: 3836: 3829: 3799: 3789: 3766: 3759: 3741: 3731: 3697: 3687: 3674: 3667: 3652: 3642: 3626: 3619: 3604: 3594: 3581: 3574: 3549: 3542: 3527: 3517: 3504: 3497: 3475: 3468: 3444: 3437: 3404: 3397: 3370: 3363: 3326: 3319: 3304: 3294: 3273: 3266: 3247: 3237: 3207: 3200: 3185: 3175: 3157: 3150: 3135: 3125: 3103: 3096: 3075: 3068: 3047: 3040: 3011: 3004: 2989: 2979: 2958: 2951: 2929: 2922: 2901: 2894: 2860: 2850: 2798: 2791: 2775: 2765: 2745: 2735: 2708: 2701: 2685: 2675: 2652: 2645: 2630: 2620: 2605: 2595: 2575: 2568: 2541: 2534: 2519: 2509: 2465: 2458: 2443: 2433: 2416: 2409: 2383: 2376: 2351: 2344: 2329: 2319: 2306: 2299: 2267: 2260: 2245: 2235: 2218: 2211: 2195: 2185: 2148: 2141: 2126: 2116: 2098: 2091: 2076: 2066: 2048: 2041: 2026: 2016: 1993: 1986: 1971: 1961: 1945: 1938: 1920: 1910: 1884: 1877: 1862: 1852: 1821: 1814: 1799: 1789: 1772: 1765: 1731: 1724: 1708: 1698: 1682: 1675: 1660: 1650: 1633: 1626: 1596: 1589: 1557: 1550: 1535: 1525: 1512: 1505: 1490: 1480: 1460: 1453: 1443: 1437: 1422: 1415: 1372: 1365: 1348: 1338: 1320: 1313: 1295: 1285: 1271: 1264: 1248: 1238: 1213: 1206: 1186: 1176: 1150: 1143: 1127: 1117: 1103: 1096: 1081: 1071: 1052: 1045: 1029: 1023: 1017: 994: 984: 971: 964: 944: 937: 912: 905: 890: 880: 863: 856: 834: 827: 802: 795: 780: 770: 753: 746: 708: 701: 619: 612: 576: 569: 539: 532: 435:), James Storm ( 431:), A.J. 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