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them into his diction. Otherwise, there is too much back and forth, and the article can begin to sound a bit like what
Virginia Woolf had said about Captain Marryat's books, i.e. contain springy prose. But it is not a big deal. I have now reverted the article to your last edit. Please accept my heartfelt apology. Apologies also to
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does not give an adequate overview of the content of the article. It says nothing about his early life, is vague in places and contains general statements that are tangential to
Creighton and could be stated (as I tried to do) with more direct relevance to him, like "around the time that history was
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reverted them wholesale without discussion. I also made some minor edits to streamline notes in the next section, which were also reverted without comment by the same user. I am unwatching the article and this page, and I wish you good luck, but I think there is a lot of work to do on this article
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