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944:, it still has 13,000. Less is more, deciding what to leave out is part of the art of good writing, and you may have a hard time getting reviewers to slog through that much, and even more, you may be able to get three FAs (or a Featured topic), if you consider structuring the content differently. One of the biggest favors ever done to me at
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Edwards, Benjamin R.; Russell, James K. (2000). "Distribution, nature, and origin of NeogeneâQuaternary magmatism in the northern Cordilleran volcanic province, Canada". Geological Society of America Bulletin. Geological Society of America. 112 (8): 1280, 1281, 1283, 1284,
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After giving it some thought I think the sections about central volcanoes, satellitic cones and subglacial volcanoes might not be necessary. Most of the features described in these sections are already mentioned in "Lava fields and plateaus" and any information about them could be moved into their
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Another idea would be to split the "Eruptive history" section into its own article since that is the largest subsection in the entire MEVC article. Splitting it would bring the readable prose size down to well below 9,000 words which would give room for some reorganization of that section. I will
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respective articles which would help trim the article size. Since two of the central volcanoes (Spectrum Range and
Armadillo Peak) are not on any named lava field or plateau it would probably be okay to add a paragraph in the structure section about central volcanoes along with satellitic cones.
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I will look into converting these sources to sfns, especially footnote 10 since that is the one with the most page numbers. It should take less work now since roughly half of the page numbers in footnote 10 were for content in the "Eruptive history" section, which has mostly been moved to
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which has roughly the same amount of readable prose as this article. I'm thinking maybe the subdivisions table should be replaced with content about each geological formation since there's still room for 2000+ words before reaching 9000 words of readable prose.
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to get quicker and more responses. When this PR is closed, please remove it from the list. Also, consider adding the sidebar to your userpage to help others discover pre-FAC PRs, and please review other articles in that template. Thanks!
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It has been over a month since the last comment. Are you still interested in receiving feedback? If so, I would suggest asking for feedback on the
Wikiprojects attached to this article and asking Sandy if they still want to review this.
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There are two background sections; find a way to re-name one of them so there are unique sub-headings? (I suggest removing the first "background" sub-heading under the geography section-- it is implied by leaving it off.
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Do note that most of the noncapitalized ones were written by one person (me). I am not sure what the
English language rules are for this situation so I usually go with the capitalization used by the employed sources.
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I think I'll stop here for now because the writing is quite competent-- my changes are mostly personal preference. I'm more interested in how the size can be cut down; I see potential here for three FAs:
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The prose is quite competent and a pleasure to read; please feel free to revert anything I change. I have just started and may not get through the rest quickly, as I am getting on a plane shortly.
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and I'm not sure which one is more appropriate. I checked to see if
Knowledge (XXG) has a naming convention for geologic names but there doesn't seem to be one; the closest I could find was one for
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815:"Include"? Are there others? How about just "are"? If not, name the alternates? Alternative names for the Spectrum Range include the Spectrum Mountains and the Rainbow Mountains.
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Should those be converted to sfns for identification of individual page numbers? Also 1280â1284, 1286â1287, 1291â1293Â ? Work is lessened by using section headings as I did at
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I've listed this article about a volcano group in
British Columbia, Canada, for peer review because I plan on bringing it to FA class. Any suggestions are greatly appreciated.
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I've decided to completely retitle those sections to first, second, third, fourth and fifth magmatic cycles. Also retitled their subsections about the eruptive periods.
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