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42:'s edits into better ones, but I don't want to discourage someone from editing; I think a peer review would be helpful so that somebody uninvolved in this conflict can step in and take a look at actual content. I don't think I need mediation or anything, but a fresh eye would be appreciated. 37:
I've been having some minor conflict with an anon user who's introducing some of what I consider overlinking/redundancy/stylistic problems into the article. (Take a look at the history to see the full extent of the situation.) I'm not sure how to make
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The lists within the text are inelegant, not especially useful and incomplete so cut them down to the main ones (I'm looking at the ones of manufacturers and possible materials).
131:- the use of possibly doesn't inspire the reader to have confidence in the rest of the article. The use of "massive" is unnecessary (and I suppose slightly point-of-view). 137:
I think you've dealt with anon correctly so far, and should continue trying to talk to him, but also clean-up or revert his edits as necessary to keep the article decent.
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Incidentally, this article still isn't the best, but I figured it'd get more response here than on the talk page.
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The invention of the mouse pre-existed the invention of the mousepad by about seventeen years
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The Corepad Deskpad XXXL, possibly the largest pad on the market, is a massive 90cm x 45cm.
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Some of the sentences don't show encyclopaedic quality:
113:The article needs to be referenced throughout. 8: 7: 28: 116:It's unclear in places, such as: 124:- what (was) published in 1979? 1: 142:20:06, 28 October 2006 (UTC) 107:21:09, 27 October 2006 (UTC) 84:02:07, 27 October 2006 (UTC) 61:01:59, 27 October 2006 (UTC) 157: 122:...and published in 1979 93:peer review suggestions 18:Knowledge:Peer review 148: 82: 74: 71: 59: 51: 48: 156: 155: 151: 150: 149: 147: 146: 145: 105: 81: 72: 69: 66: 58: 49: 46: 43: 35: 26: 25: 24: 12: 11: 5: 154: 152: 112: 110: 109: 101: 77: 54: 40:69.108.115.193 34: 29: 27: 15: 14: 13: 10: 9: 6: 4: 3: 2: 153: 144: 143: 140: 135: 132: 130: 125: 123: 119: 114: 108: 104: 100: 96: 92: 88: 87: 86: 85: 80: 76: 75: 63: 62: 57: 53: 52: 41: 33: 30: 23: 19: 136: 133: 128: 126: 121: 117: 115: 111: 67: 64: 44: 36: 89:Please see 97:. Thanks, 91:automated 70:Switcher 47:Switcher 32:Mousepad 22:Mousepad 20:‎ | 139:Trebor 16:< 95:here 79:cont 56:cont 73:cat 50:cat 99:AZ 103:t

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Mousepad
Mousepad
69.108.115.193
Switchercat
cont
01:59, 27 October 2006 (UTC)
Switchercat
cont
02:07, 27 October 2006 (UTC)
automated
here
AZ
t
21:09, 27 October 2006 (UTC)
Trebor
20:06, 28 October 2006 (UTC)

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