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Is the word "instantiate" used correctly? Webster translates this as "to represent (an abstraction) by a concrete instance, e.g., heroes instantiate ideals." The article uses the term in a manner similar to "establishes," "authorizes," or "allows." I'd suggest using a more appropriate
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Is it neccesary to boldface "Article X" the first time it is mentioned in a section? It doesn't really add anything to the article, and also seems redundant, given that in most cases, it is the first word of the
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I've worked forever on this article. I got it to GA awhile ago. Forgot about it, then realized I wanted to get it to FA. So here it goes. Yell at me if you must.
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I've made several edits and included some comments on pending issues in the Discussion page.
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Someone please copyedit the last paragraph of Article XI section and the Criticisms section.
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I have made several edits to the article, and have the following comments:
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The notes section should be merged with the references section.
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