100:
I switched the order of some references around to comply with the Manual of Style. One thing that stands out from looking over the article quickly is that it switches between present tense (eg. Jillian Hill sings a song), past tense (eg. The match started off with John Cena...) and conditional tense
101:(Shawn Michaels would then attempt...). An article like this should all be in past tense (ie. "Jillian Hill sang a song" and "Shawn Michaels then attempted..."), as the event happened in the past.
190:
3) "However, Kane recuperated and chokeslammed Booker following a pin, thus winning the match." This sentence seems to imply that Kane pinned Booker, then recovered and chokeslammed him.
37:
I've listed this article for peer review because I want this article to reach at least Good
Article Candidacy. I want any comments/contributions possible to improve the article
81:
21:
123:
Well I see what you mean, I mean to say "In the climax of the match, Nitro would slam Jeff onto the barricade, giving MNM control over the Hardys.
120:
1) I don't understand this sentence: In the climax of the match, Nitro slammed Jeff onto the barricaded applying a facelock later in the ring.
283:
155:
2) Why would Jamie Noble, the third entrant in the
Cruiserweight Open, enter after Jimmy Wang Yang, the sixth entrant?
230:
106:
295:
264:
234:
218:
183:
148:
110:
93:
17:
73:
288:
278:
256:
226:
210:
175:
140:
102:
61:
275:
Just a quick glance - and I can see 6 - 7 images. You only need 2-3, in my view 6-7 is overkill.
31:
77:
89:
242:
196:
161:
126:
47:
85:
80:
style. If you would find such a review helpful, please click
76:
review of the article for issues relating to grammar and
117:
I've been doing some copyediting. A couple of concerns:
225:
4) Many of the references are lacking Access Dates.
8:
72:A script has been used to generate a semi-
7:
28:
239:I will get to that later today.
1:
296:18:42, 30 November 2007 (UTC)
265:15:39, 29 November 2007 (UTC)
235:06:15, 29 November 2007 (UTC)
219:15:39, 29 November 2007 (UTC)
184:15:39, 29 November 2007 (UTC)
149:15:39, 29 November 2007 (UTC)
111:05:38, 29 November 2007 (UTC)
94:02:46, 29 November 2007 (UTC)
44:04:31, 28 November 2007 (UTC)
18:Knowledge (XXG):Peer review
312:
193:Error as I see ill fix it
32:No Way Out (2007)
22:No Way Out (2007)
303:
293:
291:
286:
281:
253:
251:
249:
207:
205:
203:
172:
170:
168:
137:
135:
133:
58:
56:
54:
311:
310:
306:
305:
304:
302:
301:
300:
289:
284:
279:
277:
247:
245:
243:
201:
199:
197:
166:
164:
162:
131:
129:
127:
92:
52:
50:
48:
35:
26:
25:
24:
12:
11:
5:
309:
307:
299:
298:
272:
271:
270:
269:
268:
267:
227:GaryColemanFan
223:
222:
221:
188:
187:
186:
153:
152:
151:
114:
113:
103:GaryColemanFan
97:
96:
88:
40:
34:
29:
27:
15:
14:
13:
10:
9:
6:
4:
3:
2:
308:
297:
294:
292:
287:
282:
274:
273:
266:
263:
262:
260:
259:
254:
238:
237:
236:
232:
228:
224:
220:
217:
216:
214:
213:
208:
192:
191:
189:
185:
182:
181:
179:
178:
173:
157:
156:
154:
150:
147:
146:
144:
143:
138:
122:
121:
119:
118:
116:
115:
112:
108:
104:
99:
98:
95:
91:
87:
83:
79:
75:
71:
70:
69:
68:
67:
65:
64:
59:
42:
38:
33:
30:
23:
19:
276:
257:
241:
240:
211:
195:
194:
176:
160:
159:
141:
125:
124:
62:
46:
45:
43:
39:
36:
158:Small Error
84:. Thanks,
74:automated
41:Thanks,
20: |
78:house
16:<
258:talk
231:talk
212:talk
177:talk
142:talk
107:talk
82:here
63:talk
285:nel
280:Dav
86:APR
290:03
252:11
250:93
248:cO
244:Tr
233:)
206:11
204:93
202:cO
198:Tr
171:11
169:93
167:cO
163:Tr
136:11
134:93
132:cO
128:Tr
109:)
57:11
55:93
53:cO
49:Tr
261:)
255:(
246:U
229:(
215:)
209:(
200:U
180:)
174:(
165:U
145:)
139:(
130:U
105:(
90:t
66:)
60:(
51:U
Text is available under the Creative Commons Attribution-ShareAlike License. Additional terms may apply.