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Not a lot to say, really, The main points about these lists are that they should be (a) accurate, which I assume this is, and (b) clearly introduced, which this more or less is. So I have just a few prose quibbles.
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Clarify the different uses of "debut". In relation to DMX, "debuted" seems to refer to a song's first appearance in the chart. But the reference to Britney Spears' debut album seems to mean the
251: 70: 66: 141:"This data is..." As "data" is a Latin plural, the correct form is: "These data are..." If you think this sounds a bit pedantic, you could change it to: "This information is..." 51: 43: 114:
I've listed this article for peer review because… I would like to have suggestions be made for the article to try and aim the article to Feature list status. Thank you
147:"Universe" in the statistical sense of a population from which a sample is taken will not be widely understood, so it might be better to use a term lke "database" 103: 59: 256: 236: 215: 191: 126: 36: 17: 95: 187: 169:"...and was certified diamond" sounds a bit jargony. "Certified as diamond", with the link, should do. 122: 183: 99: 245: 232: 211: 118: 228: 207: 203: 175:"and went on to win..." could be simplified to "and won..." 98:
review of the article for issues relating to grammar and
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Slim pickings, for sure, but I can't see anything else.
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I suggest you write number figures 1-9 into words per
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