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It's been a while since this article's last Good Article Nomination, and it has expanded considerably since then. I don't see any obvious issues at first glance, other than the History.com ref, but maybe someone else can shed some more light on this.
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The citation formatting is generally inconsistent. Some news sources are rendered as long cites and some are in bibliography and given shortened cites. Pick one or the other for news/non-paginated sources. formatting should be more consistent
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post-Cold War mass genocide, happening in 1994 with 500K-1M dead (though to be fair, they were busy going broke competing with Microsoft Encarta).⸺(
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paragraph. The way this is structured feels unfortunate to me and the information presentation would be improved by altering this
69: 300: 295: 224:- "Pierre Rutare, the Tutsi father of Belgian-Rwandan singer Stromae, was killed in the 1994 Rwandan Genocide." unsourced 50: 62: 266:- the order of genocide is repeated as full cite, move to bibliography and do shortened footnotes for consistency 221:- "HBO Films released the made-for-television historical drama film titled Sometimes in April in 2005." unsourced 166: 17: 275: 173: 44: 115: 271: 170: 92: 231:, another level-one one paragraph heading. this feels like it can be significantly expanded 267: 284: 257:- citation from Genin, Aaron should be sentence or title case not all caps 254:- there has to be a better source than the unlinked Akayesu trial document 186:
section there are several one or two sentence paragraphs and one
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I consider peer review of this article important, since
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Rwandan Patriotic Front's military campaign and victory
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Some drive by comments, not a deep dive by any means
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