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You might think of me as a lunatic for bringing a FA-class article to PR. But this article is on one of the most recognizable pop stars today, and thus, since its FA promotion in 2016, it has undergone significant changes. I think this article is now rather sprawling, and I do think it needs to be
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cut down in places. Any comment regarding how this article can be improved, and routinely maintained, is very much appreciated. Thank you very much.
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