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This is a new article I've written on a very important topic for
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Anyway, that's it from me. Thanks for your efforts and good luck with taking the article further. (I believe that it would have a good shot at GA so long as you can get a thorough peer review). Regards,
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I made some edits to the article, mainly to the lead section. Looks very good overall. Well referenced. Good images. My only recommendation would be to consider moving
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