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This is my first article and I would therefore appreciate any feedback you may have. I have been having trouble working out how to add my article name to my article. I;m sure it's quite simple, but can;t seem to work it out. I would also be keen to know whether biography style articles should feature
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SPhilbrick, I made the citation change that you suggested - shame on me for not getting that right the first time. All the other edits look good. Unfortunately, I am so new to
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I would like to post my completed feature. Will someone please take a look to ensure it meets specifications. I included several reference citations to back up my assertions. Also, I uploaded a promotional photo, however, I'm not seeing it on the page. Any guidance on this would be appreciated.
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Today is the 95th birthday of Fr. John
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My biggest concern was the inconsistancy of the article. Different layouts for different sections, repitition of concepts by different editors in different sections. Too many editors. I'll take your advice and post on the discussion page. I'll wait a year and see what happens.
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References should enable a reader to track down the reference - it doesn't have to be online, but there should be enough info so one could figure out how to find it. The last reference is to an efficiency report—is there more information? Is it in the St. Louis
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I am writing about a high school in Silver Spring, Maryland which existed from 1933-1988. The school is now closed and the buildings have changed hands. I would like to document and consolidate information about the history of the school.
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I do not know how to add the personal information box to the right of the article for information such as height, weight, place of birth etc. Would really appreciate your assistance.
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Photos are not just allowed, but encouraged. However, they must not be violations of copyright rules. If you can obtain an acceptable photograph, consider including it in an
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