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Well the sources don't give many details. I can say, though, that this would not have included scheduled civil routes. Civil air traffic into Bosnia was at this point rare, and such flights would have been authorized by the UN. The violations would have been mostly smuggling, transportation of
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THe NATO AWACS squadron was used, as were French and
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For that matter, do what know what kind of fighter support was available for the operation, and if said fighter support ever flew with the sentries? It seems to me that there would be some kind of air combat support available, but nothing is really mentioned in the article.
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The main type of aircraft used should be identified earlier in the article than the last sentence, and the other aircraft used should be mentioned as well - were fighter aircraft used for surveillance at all?
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The article states that hungry was willing to provide fighter support, but does not mention the kind of fighters that would be available for use. See what you can do about finding info on that point.
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On what date did the UN "eventually called for NATO to use force in response"? (I'd also suggest the the word 'eventually' be removed as it's a bit non-neutral)
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