907:" (so literally "autumn maneuvers") in the text, and it's a useful shorthand for the fleet maneuvers that took place every year from mid-August to mid-September. And while I understand that autumn takes place in different months down in Oz and New Zealand, I don't think anyone is going to have trouble in the context, since it's book-ended by dates in August and November.
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Unfortunately, there's not more to say. And as for what happened to her after the war, there's nothing more to say. I can't even tell you that she was scrapped under the terms of
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It may be that the WWI section seems shorter still owing to the level of detail in earlier sections -- OTOH if this is all a faithful reflection of the balance in the main sources, there's probably not much to be done about it... Cheers,
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I like the bits about sailing to and from China. I thought a similar amount of detail for the
Russian squadron that sailed from the Baltic to be destroyed at Tsushima was appropriate given the enormity of the task, so maybe I'm
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Another overhauled German battleship article up for ACR. This one served as the flagship of Kaiser Bill's little brother for the first years of her career, and she ruffled some diplomatic feathers, since her namesake, the
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Part of the reason I wanted to include the information on the stops was to illustrate what a transcontinental deployment looked like in those days. But I'll defer if others agree with your view.
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I think it would add more to the article if you could expand the World War I section, and split part of it in two, and expound upon what happened to her post-WWI that led to her being scrapped.
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I mustn't have come across Harv errors when looking over your articles before at ACR or FAC, as I usually make a point of mentioning it then... ;-) Cheers, 14:47, 28 January 2014 (UTC)
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You could use a few more citations in the beginning of the World War I section where you talk about her being used in the V Battle
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That's what's in Gröner, and yes, I found the first time that firm is mentioned and the full name is given. Are these two names for the same company or is this a discrepancy?
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Indeed. While checking this I noticed that the explanation on compound armor on the class article is fucked up and needs to be fixed. This article, however, is good to go.--
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For what it's worth, all of the images are pre-1923 publications so they're all PD in the US. Many thanks for your thorough review and copy-editing, Ian.
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I checked amazon.de and no joy. Since it was a 10 volume set, I wonder if they used one ISBN for the entire set?--
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It all comes from page 99 in HRS. There's no need for more citations.
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