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G'day, I made a couple of minor tweaks, but unfortunately I'm out of my comfort zone with this. Art is not something I know much about (I won't be able to review for content). But anyway, I will have a go at reviewing...
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I've add my support above as you have addressed most of my comments, but hopefully someone with more knowledge of art comes along to give you a more thorough review. Cheers,
309:"The humorous aspect of this in 1963..." Is humorous the right word here? One imagines that artists paint pictures about events in the past all the time...
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Ok, no worries. You can probably get them from
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I am nominating this article for A-Class review because it is one of my better MILHIST contributions that has not had an A-class review.
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