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I completely rewrote this article a while back, adding maps, references etc. I think it's in a pretty good shape now - it had been the subject of extensive edit-warring between partisan editors, which thankfully now seems to have ceased. I would appreciate a peer-review. --
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More footnotes would be appropriate. There are still some "citation needed" tags in the article that need to be fixed, at a minimum.
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Overall, this isn't bad; but more thorough citation and some copyediting would do well here.
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Quite nice, assuming the edit-warring doesn't pick up again ;-)
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