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Reading this article left me confused about what the topic was and its significance. I'm just not really sure about what this is - what about this case did the press covering it identify as significant? From what is here, it just reads as "some people got investigated" and that's it. It also needs
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The problems are is that the grammar and structure is difficult to understand. Reading this article, it is difficult to follow the sequence of events. The lead does not properly introduce the topic and why it is notable, instead giving background information, leading to a confusing start. The lead
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the content in the body, not contain new information - maybe add a background section and put that content there? The lead should also say why it is notable.
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Hello! From the sources I can see it seems to be notable (though it is difficult to evaluate so I am not sure. The issues I have identified are as follows:
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OK, I got what needs to copyedit and I will try to do it. If there is anything else I have not correct, could you assist me with that?
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You can use the tools to translate the original source into
English to check it out; it is shocking news in mainland China.
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