1746:, I've started addressing some of these, and it seemed helpful to "tick" them off in your bulleted list above -- if that wasn't appropriate, please let me know and I'll track my progress another way. I also raised a question about her name. I think Yamakawa Sutematsu is her most common name, but it still feels odd to call her Yamakawa in the sections after she is married. And, the article is named Ōyama Sutematsu! So perhaps it should call her Ōyama throughout...??
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Oh, I see I misunderstood a bit too and I should have clarified my point. The article name should ideally be the name she lived her life with till her death, so that's correct. When you start with the main text, you start with her full name at birth and refer to her by her maiden surname till we come
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But I am still not entirely sure how to proceed. I think her most common name is
Yamakawa Sutematsu -- but it feels odd to call her Yamakawa in the sections after her marriage. It also makes me question whether the article itself should be renamed to Yamakawa instead of Ōyama. Would you advise that I
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This information seems clearly implied by the fact that
Shigekata seems to have died before Sutematsu's birth, and that Hiroshi is making decisions on behalf of the whole family (and later the whole clan) by the time of the Boshin war, but I really can't find any reliable sourcing that clarifies the
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This is what I have editors advise to do generally, to avoid the repetitive look. Anyway it is understood that if one (/more) source is mentioned after a particular bunch of lines, then the source supports those facts. I agree with the trouble while rearranging things, I have faced that myself, but
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Any subject who has had their surname changed should be referred to by their most commonly used name. If their most commonly used name does include their prior surname, and you're discussing a period of their life before the surname change, refer to them by their prior surname. In other words, when
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I'm going to need to look beyond Nimura for the sourcing here, which is why I've delayed. I also want to make a note for myself here to find more definitive sourcing for her birth name -- the sources I've seen say she was named Sakiko at birth, but another editor changed it to Saki in the lead, and
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For now I've added what I could find about their courtship. Oddly, Nimura (her main biographer) doesn't say anything about the first proposal or how they met. They don't seem to have known each other well even at the second proposal, so he might have proposed before they even really met. I'll keep
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I have finally addressed all of your points above! Many thanks for your patience while I have poked along with this article, and all of your attention and feedback. I think it has really improved! Would you be comfortable assessing it as a "Good
Article"? Or do you see any further issues?
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He's referred to by his last name or his full name everywhere, no more uses of just the first name. I think this makes some of the paragraphs about their children and marriage sound a little weird (repeating both full names a lot) but I couldn't find a more elegant way to write them.
1222:→ make a separate line by removing "and", say "The second character (松, matsu) means pine, or one from among Three Friends of Winter, suggesting she wished her daughter good luck (on her voyage/travel?)" I feel this clarifies better that the pine signifies good luck.
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Do you think this is mandatory? I can see how it is less visually appealing to repeat refs, but in the long term I think it is useful for each sentence to have its own ref, so that the sourcing doesn't get lost or ambiguous if the paragraph changes.
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Since Iwao is his first name, shouldn't he be Ōyama? I call him "Ōyama Iwao" a lot to disambiguate him from Ōyama
Sutematsu. I guess the full picture of what to call him will be clearer after Sutematsu's name is consistent throughout the article.
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so that the text does not get sandwiched between them and headings don't get pushed to the right. After all the work we have done here, the article is now ready for promotion :) I will just put this nice link over here
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Citations shouldn't be in the lead unless there is a controversial claim, here it may be the fact that she was the first
Japanese lady to get a degree. And all facts of the lead must be mentioned in the article's main
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I went through and "commented out" any repeated refs. That way the article doesn't look cluttered, but if someone is editing the paragraph they can still see the sources that support each individual statement.
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I was wondering if the first line of the lead could shorten the part in the brackets as it seems a bit too long till we get to the end of it.. may be omit a few bits of info already visible in the infobox
1723:, thank you so much for these comments! I will work to improve the article based on your feedback over the next little while (perhaps a week or two), and let you know when it is ready for another look.
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Japanese too; I think they have access to some kinds of Japanese-language materials that I don't. So maybe my English sources are mistaken somehow, and other sources can clarify.
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Thanks for all your efforts, the article looks excellent now. Though this is not a must for GA, I would recommend removing a few images and aligning most to the right per
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I did my best with this, though there's some unsourced material added by another editor (about the good luck of the pine motif) which I'm not sure if I should remove.
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Hillary and Bill Clinton, use "Rodham met Clinton while they were students at Yale", referring to Hillary using her then-current surname.
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Looked at the article length again.. the lead should be proportionately long, which means at least two good paragraphs including all major points of the article (
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After her first mention by full name in the lead and main text, call her any one of these names consistently throughout the article "Yamakawa" or "Sakiko"
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So sorry for the delay.. I got really busy with a few articles. Well-written article and on a very interesting topic too :) Here are all my comments:
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categories. You can list it yourself wherever you think appropriate, just make sure the talk page GA template mentions the right category. Cheers,
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Sourcing: Sourcing is decent and reliable with well-formatted citations, though the ISBN is needed for the 2015 book and the date should be mmddyy.
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Good job so far :) No problem with the ticks, I think they are a great way of marking things off. I have addressed the name point above. Cheers,
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that I came across a few days back.. it made me so happy that I came to know about this remarkable lady from your awesome article. Well done!
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I would like some brief details of how she got selected for the
Iwakura Mission, especially as she made it after a very tough life and a war.
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Hmm I see. I, like many others, clearly have difficulty understanding
Japanese names :) No problem, call him by the full name consistently.
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Thank you, that's much better. A few things though. The paragraph should end with an inline citation for the pine motif part. In this part:
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Excellent job! Just a few things. "Japanese woman" is repeated in the first line, and it would be good to include the year of the siege.
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says "The most common use of boldface is to highlight the first occurrence of the title word/phrase of the article in the lead section".
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wished her good luck by choosing the second character of the new name meaning pine (松, matsu), or one from among Three Friends of Winter
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Indeed, my apologies -- got sidetracked by some other shiny editing... I will likely make some more progress this weekend.
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A pronoun doesn't look nice when you start an article (main text). Take her full name at birth and say "X was born on ..."
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to her married life. From there we use her new surname, which is the one in the article title. I hope it is clear now :)
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I consulted a Japanese-speaking friend and I am now happy with how the article treats the childhood nickname Saki.
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Glad you asked about this! I find it really interesting that they had so much trouble finding girls to send.
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There is a bunch of duplinks. You can view them using this tool and link the items only on first mention.
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I've further refined how this is written, and found a source for the "three friends of winter" part.
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Thanks, I was really interested to see more about this beautiful initiative in the article :)
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