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656:"Bolton reached the final in 1894, but were beaten comfortably by Notts County, losing 4–1 at Goodison Park despite a strong performance by goalkeeper John Sutcliffe." Too much info that is cluttering the point. Change to "Bolton reached the final in 1894, but were beaten 4–1 at Goodison Park by Notts County."--
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After reading the lead, I have begun to wonder "is this article notable?". I understand it was the final of a tournament it seems, but none the less it was still just a soccer game. Wouldn't it be better to merge this with something? I don't see how this is notable at the moment. The refs should
473:"The 1904 FA Cup Final was a football match between Bolton Wanderers and Manchester City on 23 April 1904 at Crystal Palace in London." → "The 1904 FA Cup Final was a football match between Bolton Wanderers and Manchester City on April 23, 1904 at the Crystal Palace in London."--
749:"Both teams played 2-3-5, the standard formation of the period." What? I've seen alot of in-universe writing styles. The article is mainly wrote only for soccer fans, and not for everyone. You should explain the information that you would think a non-fan would not understand.--
718:"Though Lancashire was a football stronghold in the early years of the professional game, providing a large proportion of Football League teams, the cup final had never been contested between two Lancashire clubs until the 1904 final." Source?--
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Besides adding a caption, change "23 April 1904" to "April 23, 1904". It reads and looks better. Also, you may just want to create the template you are using for future reference. Having all that code in there just makes it
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