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If you dig into the primary sources that were used by the secondary sources in the article, you’ll see that most of them actually are 610 documents. The CECC and James Tong, as well as other sources, rely almost exclusively on official party documents, and those are the sources that are discussing in
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OK, everything looks good here. I suggest keeping your eyes out for further publications that discuss this office and its evolving role in
Chinese politics. With some more updated info, and maybe the image you're looking for and an organization chart or something, it could be made even better.;)
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The propaganda section is a little weak, and the example given isn't the most compelling. One way to expand it is to add a short paragraph on how the propaganda strategy developed from April to July in 1999. There's also some good material on the
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I added some material that gives a better overview of the character of the propaganda campaign, mostly taken from other pages, and also added some details on how the campaign was initiated by the 610 office / central leading group.
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I added one that was deleted earlier without good reason. I also requested permission to use an image of 610 officers at a courtroom that I found on another site, but not sure if I’ll get a response from the owner of the
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Otherwise I think it's almost there. No dead links or internal links needing disambiguation, the writing and references are of a high quality, and as far as I can tell it covers all the office's functions.
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Are there any more images that could be used? The ones being used are helpful, but only one of them is directly related to the 610 office and the anti-Falun Gong campaign, which should be the focus.
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I haven’t heard of any updates, but the article makes it clear now that Zhou held the position through 2012. —
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I've updated all the citations to use the standardised formats, and added the external links where available.—
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