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This is a very interesting and detailed article, but as the article stands, it cannot be said to be well written, because the grammar is not correct. Unresolved, this will cause the article to fail, and if there is a lot of correcting to do, I cannot copy edit the article with you and review it at
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I happy to review this interesting article. I'll send comments section by section, and where there are minor copy editing issues I will do them myself—please revert them if you wish. It will take a few days to check the article through before I start producing comments.
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File:Settlement_Patterns_Cem_Gorge.jpg|The
Cijevna above the Montenegrin-Albanian border File:Cemi_i_Nik%C3%A7it.jpg|Dried out riverbed of ''Cem i Vuklit'' File:Tamara_01.JPG|Tamara Gorge, Albania </gallery:
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Rakića Kuće doesn't change its meaning, because a tumulus (basically, a large burial mound) has a fixed location, so it can't be found somewhere else other than in its place of origin.
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I have great pleasure in passing your article. I've added a map, which can be altered or improved in any way if you wish me to. Thanks for all your work!
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The infobox image is interesting, but confusing, as it's hard to understand the size of the canyon. Consider replacing it with another image, such as ]
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Bazuar në të dhënat e
Institutit Bioteknik, në lumin e Cemit gjenden 22 lloje peshqish të regjistruar të cilët janë të ndara në 8 familje
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Fauna në këtë regjion është e pasur. Aty jetojnë 8 lloje amfibësh, 16 lloje zvarranikësh, 130 lloje zogjsh
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