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That's all I could find with the article, otherwise for a lack of information on somebody like this, it's well written and as comprehensive as it could be! This should be a relatively quick review given the accuracy and broadness of the article. If all of the above are clarified then it should have
526:"Tall, dark and suave, with an often sharp tongue" - I read this out as a little bit unencyclopaedic, but if you would like to keep it in I would be fine with it. I just thought it could be re-worded? 714:
Thanks for the review! Should all be addressed. We were lucky to find what we have on him, I think he's one of those who are OK for GA but unlikely ever to have the material to really go further.♦
643:"Philippe was described as being tall, dark and lanky of frame, with an aquiline nose, long bony fingers and an acid tongue" - is this taken out from a quote of someone? 47: 317: 80: 70: 585:
I actually like American English and I think in most places it's the best variant of English to be spoken verbally, but 'fall' = 'autumn' is ridiculous!
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I included something of that effect as a number of sources describe him as such and we cover it in the personal life, I've shortened to just "The suave".
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Thanks for your speedy response, doctor! It's amazing that so much information is here in the article as the sources are scarce. A very deserving GA!
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Thanks. Yes, a colourful character, not much about him biographically though, it's very comprehensive considering what can be found!♦
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The References section should be split into two columns as it exceeds the usual limit
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Yes, but it is an American article so "fall" applies more than Autumn!
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The lead summarises the article well, so this meets the GA criteria
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social season" - am I right to assume that this means autumn!?
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Interesting article. I'll have this one to you within a day!
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picks up no dead links, and all of them appear formatted
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