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For now, I went ahead and struck it and I'll take a look at it later to try and figure out which is the situation and reupload if it's not the designer. It's hard to say just from looking at it because there's been a huge Crush 40 fan community for some time and it may very well be that someone from
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Thank you. All comments addressed. This article was a challenge, but I felt compelled to rescue it since it was this article that brought me here to be a
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Yeah, I caught this after you picked up the review and cursed a little bit and knew that would get called out. But alas, I was at work and couldn't fix it. It's fixed now.
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that you cited in the last sentence of the article is quite fascinating—the name is up there alongside such names as
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