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1258:"On 25 March 2015, Schembri captained Malta for the first time in a friendly against Georgia, fulfilling this role 16 times." Change to "Schembri captained Malta for the first time on 25 March 2015, in a friendly against Georgia; he ultimately served as captain 16 times."
1227:"In a match against Italy..." This whole paragraph feels a little unnecessary. It it is trying to show the praise Schembri earned from Pirlo, it is already included in the quote box; including this disrupts the flow of the section, so I'd suggest removing it outright.
828:"In the match against Aris on 27 November, he scored and assisted the winning goal in the 2–1 win..." This sounds like he both scored and assisted on the winning goal. Try something like: "...he scored once and assisted on the winning goal in the 2–1 win..."
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797:"Following the rescinding of his contract with Olympiakos Volou..." This comes out of nowhere. Did he have his contract rescinded because they were demoted? It sounds like that's what happened, but it is not fully clear. Try to elaborate a bit.
1010:"...and with possibly not figuring out in manager Miguel Leal's plans for the following season..." This is unclear. Does it mean not figuring in Leal's plans, as in Leal wasn't sure how to use Schembri? If so then get rid of the "out."
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Schembri is a Maltese former footballer..." I realise it is awkward wording, but it has been used for other sports
717:"Ferencváros signed Schembri in February 2010..." Note where Ferencvaros is based in. Later on it notes they play in the top Hungarian league; as this seems to be Schembri's first time in a top-tier league, I'd especially note that.
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Looks good. I addressed your two questions above, and regarding the retirement comments, those stem from it being unclear that he only retired from international play. But it looks clearer now, so I'm happy to pass the article.
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I think that would imply that he's completely retired from the game, which he hasn't so far. Schembri announced his retirement from international football but he is still active in the club game (although without a club at the
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Would it be possible to add any details about his playing style in the article? As it notes in the lead he had "versatility in forward roles," but nothing more on that. It seems like something that would be good to
217:"Between the summers of 2007 and 2009 he spent season-long loans with German clubs..." Would it be worth noting they are lower-level clubs? I'm not familiar with the style for football articles, but seems relevant.
562:"...Marsaxlokk were crowned league champions for the first time in their history." The "in their history" is redundant: being crowned league champions for the first time implies that already, so it can be removed.
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At the end of the season, which he concluded with five goals to his name, Panionios and
Schembri failed to agree on the renewal terms for his contract." Any idea why? Not that important, more curious than
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Thanks for taking the time to review the article. I have made the requested changes. There are some minor questions which I'm not sure about, and would like it if you provide your input. Thanks. —
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Further to the point above, I'd maybe note the years of his playing career early in the lead as well. Maybe instead of noting his last club, note his active years? Or something like that.
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310:"After completing the 2011–12 season, Schembri was signed by Omonia." I would note it's a Cypriot club somewhere here.
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