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The article's well-written and comprehensive. It's stable and well-organized. The sources used appear extremely reliable and I have no doubt that the information's accurate (without reading the foreign sources). I'm going to pass the article with the hope that you'll still consider my suggestions.
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The other sections read very well. Your prose is very professional, and reads like any old journal article. My one other nitpick is the very choppy records section. I understand that writing these records in one big jumbled section would be even choppier, so I think it's fine as is.
153:- Could you clarify what "first described" means? I think it's saying that it was originally only thought to live there, and if that's the case, it wasn't described from there, unless that's where scientists described it... yes, a clarification would be nice. 165:
Yes. The species may now be well-known enough that such a detailed discussion of records is superfluous, but I think the list remains interesting (and I had fun tracking down all the records!).
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The sources you used seem reliable as a whole. I'm slightly confused why the IUCN source has a link to the website's homepage and the others don't, could you please clarify?
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I suppose you could not find any free pictures of the bat. Perhaps you could add another image of one of the other bats that's aesthetically nice?
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Hi, I'll be reviewing this article. It looks rather good, and I don't have many suggestions.
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None of the others are part of a greater work, as the IUCN Red List account is.
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First described in 2001 from Greece and Hungary, its known distribution*
134: 103: 156:The former is indeed what is meant; I've reworded. 8: 30: 201:, which looks kind of like it might be 61: 33: 7: 24: 1: 236:17:59, 2 January 2011 (UTC) 205:, with its white ear bases. 265:19:17, 2 January 2011 (UTC) 255:17:59, 2 January 2011 (UTC) 210:19:17, 2 January 2011 (UTC) 281: 199:File:Myotis mystacinus.jpg 197:. I'm interested in 89: 88: 18:Talk:Alcathoe bat 272: 252: 244: 234: 226: 139: 130: 111: 43:Copyvio detector 31: 280: 279: 275: 274: 273: 271: 270: 269: 248: 242: 230: 224: 218: 187: 174: 147: 120: 97: 91: 85: 57: 29: 22: 21: 20: 12: 11: 5: 278: 276: 268: 267: 217: 214: 213: 212: 186: 183: 182: 181: 173: 170: 169: 168: 167: 166: 159: 158: 157: 146: 143: 140: 87: 86: 84: 83: 78: 73: 67: 64: 63: 59: 58: 56: 55: 53:External links 50: 45: 39: 36: 35: 28: 25: 23: 15: 14: 13: 10: 9: 6: 4: 3: 2: 277: 266: 263: 259: 258: 257: 256: 253: 251: 246: 245: 239: 235: 233: 228: 227: 215: 211: 208: 204: 200: 196: 195:M. mystacinus 193:Added one of 192: 191: 190: 184: 179: 178: 177: 171: 164: 163: 160: 155: 154: 152: 149: 148: 144: 142: 138: 137: 133: 128: 124: 119: 118: 114: 109: 105: 101: 96: 95: 82: 79: 77: 74: 72: 69: 68: 66: 65: 60: 54: 51: 49: 46: 44: 41: 40: 38: 37: 32: 26: 19: 249: 240: 237: 231: 222: 219: 202: 194: 188: 175: 150: 135: 131: 117:Article talk 116: 112: 93: 90: 81:Instructions 260:Thank you! 104:visual edit 172:References 48:Authorship 34:GA toolbox 238:Reviewer: 71:Templates 62:Reviewing 27:GA Review 203:alcathoe 76:Criteria 216:Overall 127:history 108:history 94:Article 262:Ucucha 207:Ucucha 185:Images 243:ceran 225:ceran 145:Prose 136:Watch 16:< 250:thor 232:thor 123:edit 100:edit 125:| 106:| 102:| 132:· 129:) 121:( 113:· 110:) 98:(

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