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Done! As for the concern about the "incorrectly claiming" bit, the source the quotation as taken from only describes the claim as "erroneous" and doesn't elaborate further, and I can't seem to find either the primary source or the German statue it referred to.
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and add another source that he attended that specific undergraduate college within the larger university, as well as the year of his death (the source only says he graduated in 1860)
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References and are misformatted; they site the archival website and not the original source. You should be using the "cite book" template for .
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The last paragraph requires a little expansion; there's some vague history present in the word "rediscovered" – what happened in the interim?
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Alright, found some areas in need of citation and/or expansion. Putting on hold now; let me know if there are any questions. β€”
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The part about the copy at the University of Havana should be expanded upon in the body, not just relegated to the caption.
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began upon the building's completion in 1897. When designing a set of stairs that would lead up to the building,
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is a little high, but it looks like "gpsmycity.com" is directly copying from Knowledge, not the other way around
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The first sentence is a little hard to follow. Recommend breaking it into two sentences as follows:
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included an empty granite pedestal in the middle of the staircase, on which a statue might sit.
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Shrink the first wikilink so that it's just on "protests at Columbia", excluding "many"
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Photos are relevant and are either Creative Commons licensed or in the public domain
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How did it "come to represent the failures of the university's administration"?
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Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the
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The part about the college superstition is probably trivial
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No stability concerns present in the revision history
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