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Thinker78, I reverted it because the proposed replacement ("typical broadbill family—Eurylaimidae—found") read poorly and linked at the second mention instead of the first one. It is just two linked words next to each other, which I really don't think is enough to constitute a sea of blue. You could
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A very nice article on an interesting bird. Just a few small issues above and we'll be good to go.
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