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Brian Josephson and Jessica Utts, "Do you believe in psychic phenomena? Are they likely to be able to explain consciousness?", Times Higher Education, 8 April 1996. --- not sure author list is correct here; Utts may be first, and Blackmore may or may not be relevant (perhaps the web version has been
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I'm satisfied this article has easily reached the level required for GA. I see that fine details are being checked and polished; and the style of some citations may need to be harmonised for FA, but the GA criteria have now been met.
700:, thanks for the thorough review. I'll start working on the fixes today. I'll address the issue of the quote and the lectures that Josephson has raised too, but I'll drop a note about those on the talk page. 578:"Unusually, along with Josephson, neither Esaki nor Giaever held professorships at the time of the award." Maybe we could just say that none of the three winners had been profs, if that's what is meant. 670:
Josephson has asked for the article to mention he has been invited to give lectures. Invited lectures at notable societies might be listed in an 'Awards and distinctions' section. For example:
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In sum, this is a fine article and I'm almost ready to pass it once these small items are addressed. There are a couple that don't matter for GA but will need tidying before this goes to FA.
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Brian Sullivan, "Physics is Often a Young Man's Game", Associated Press, 17 December 1969. --- should perhaps be cited to an actual newspaper. Not a problem for GA.
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Thanks very much. I'm happy that the GA criteria have been met. Consider further updates as progress towards FA, which I wish you all the best for.
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removed the current Cavendish image (I couldn't think of a way to justify it; it was there only to avoid an all-text section),
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It's nice to find some images but perhaps the one of the current Cavendish site needs to be better justified in its caption.
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lead: is fine (but probably doesn't really need the refs). Layout: ok; weasel: no sign. fiction: n/a; lists: n/a
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I'm still discussing a couple of points with Josephson on the talk page, so I'll update you when that's done.
643:"George (New Scientist) 2006, p. 56." is a dead link. Needs fixed as untraceable as it stands. Occurs 3 times. 772: 679: 658: 597: 502: 399: 268: 164: 150: 449: 377: 115: 17: 591:
A few more might be in order as with "Jungian psychoanalysts" and "cosmic wormholes" for instance.
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fixed the order of names in the THE article (no idea why Susan Blackmore is mentioned),
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Thank you, that's much appreciated, and thanks again for your careful review.
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link isn't dead for me, and it's referenced in full on first mention,
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Recent changes basically indicate steady small-scale improvements.
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