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and tells the story of a corrupt but fearless police officer, Chulbul Pandey, and his troubled relationship with his stepfather and half-brother
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Overall a very well written and comprehensive article, I enjoyed reading it! Once they're all clarified you can have a GA.
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Thank you for your positive review. My first GA! :) --
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